Broken

Yes i felt broken 
like a bad dream I couldnt be woken 
I love to see you smile 
but times have changend, its been a while 
sense the last time we sene eachother 
I am starting to believe you love another 
sun rise sun set
 some times I wish we never met 
I would never get angry or sad 
about some one I never had 
but thats a wish I would never make 
because thats a risk to high to take 
to lose someone like you
 I hope that never comes true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/21/2013 7:36:00 PM
Moon, stopping by to say hi ;-) and welcome you to this lovely soup bowl. My name is Linda; everyone here calls me PD for fun. I'm here reading and enjoying new poets to love, appreciate and adore. (And make friends with:-) Please do not hesitate to look me up here on the soup if you need feedback on your poetry. I am looking forward to following your poems as you grow and post here at the POETRY SOUP. Take care~ LUV *LINDA
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Date: 1/13/2013 11:20:00 AM
Moon hope you get your wish...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 9:42:00 PM
beautiful writing...love the rhymes and very thoughtful X)
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Date: 1/12/2013 12:29:00 PM
Spoken from a tender heart...Enjoyed your rhymes and heartfelt verses.
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