Breaking Point

It's the final ray of sunlight 
Shinning on my cheek
To stand aginst darkness,
Too frail, too weak

The final ray of sun lights
Dim and dying in vain
It's passed time to fight back
Let the darkness reign

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/22/2017 2:58:00 AM
A very good poem, it depicts your mood very well.
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:43:00 PM
Well expressed.. Interesting name..wxw
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Wingless Moth
Date: 11/8/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you!
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