Brambling Days

Through the thorny bramble 

Our hands were sorely tried,

Stretching for the juicy ones

The black ones, way up high.

Sometimes we ate the red ones

Sharp and bitter sweet.

But the plump and sticky ripened ones,

Those ones were the treat.

We collected basketfuls

Our fingers purple stained,

But by the time we got them home,

Very few remained.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/17/2017 3:03:00 PM
Oh this is lovely :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/17/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 7/17/2017 2:45:00 PM
Yep, they never do seem to last, do they...well penned.
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/17/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 7/17/2017 1:47:00 PM
So Awesome Gary. Sounds like great fun :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 7/17/2017 1:50:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
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