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Big Foot's Tracks

He roamed the Himalayas, leaving footprints on the ground, But, tired of visitors, he ordered stiletto shoes from Ebay, And now Big Foot doesn’t wander round barefoot anymore.

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James Foulk

Date: 6/12/2011 10:13:00 AM

this one brought a smile, really enjoyed reading it. creative piece. thank you for commenting on Heavens's Delight, yes i hope to be, he brings me such joy to be with him, he picks me up everytime his mom brings him over, today we are having a birthday part for him at our place.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/7/2011 6:44:00 AM

Nice humour here Jack ...enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/5/2011 2:21:00 PM

You got me chuckling with this one, haha not helping my tummy ache at all-- Big Foot on stilettos? That I HAVE to see, lol! Love this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2011 10:26:00 PM

hahahahaha.GREAT way to use bare foot . Love your entry!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/4/2011 4:48:00 PM

hahahahaha oh the visual effect this one has Jack.. u sure come up with some terrific lines my friend to entertain us all.. smart of B.F. to fool those eyeballing him all the time..super cool.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 3:54:00 PM

hahahah, what a perspective taken with wit and humor, jack

Francine Roberts

Date: 6/4/2011 2:53:00 PM

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Francine Roberts

Date: 6/4/2011 1:54:00 PM

not long enough Jack, all entries must be at least 10 lines long

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2011 1:51:00 PM

What a hilarious entry this would make for Francine's contest! I do hope you entered it, Jack. Can just imagine Big Foot wearing stilettoes. LOL Randy claimed he saw a Big Foot sauntering out of the water and heading toward the Marquesas Islands. True! I didn't see it and he was seasick, but anything's possible... Love, Carolyn