Beep-Beep

A winged horse, a unicorn glides so effortlessly, airborne blazing its way in early morn o'er ears of sun-ripe golden corn Spying a gosling from its mother torn This winged horse, our unicorn Gathers its courage for an epic warn Poor thing ~ it's missing its horn

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/9/2018 11:21:00 AM

A cautionary warning piece of peyote prose, Gershon. Very creative poetry. Love the imagery. Love and peace, bruh.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 1:39:00 PM

Your sterling words truly make my day, Brother Freddie. Thank you for your generous praise. Best always, Gershon

Samuel Otieng

Date: 7/8/2018 5:09:00 AM

Hey Gershon. Superb imagery. I enjoyed reading this poem.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/9/2018 1:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kind words, Samuel! Best wishes, Gershon

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/7/2018 9:06:00 AM

Great use of imagery and imagination, Gershon! Janice

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2018 10:50:00 PM

Thank you for your praise and encouragement, Janice. Best wishes, Gershon

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2018 7:46:00 AM

A delightful write.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/7/2018 10:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, Richard! ~ Gershon

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/6/2018 12:17:00 PM

A lovely, sweet and well told story, Gershon, I really enjoyed it !!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/6/2018 1:02:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 1:48:00 AM

Hi Gershon.. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your well crafted write this evening. I always appreciate the giftings of a pen in the hand of a poet!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/6/2018 11:52:00 AM

You overestimate my abilities, L.M. I'm only as good as my last poem. But I appreciate your praise and encouragement. It certainly helps keep me going! Best wishes always, Gershon