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6/29/2025 for Write Your Fave Song Poetry Contest sponsored by Crystol Wood

Inspired by the Beatles song from Abbey Road, written by John Lennon, and featuring three-part vocal harmony with Paul McCartney and George Harrison.


Aah
Because the sun is bright
it makes me shine
because the sun is bright

Aah
Because a tree is tall
it makes me grow
Because a tree is tall

Aah
I say thanks, I say wow
I am here, I am now

Because a bird is free
it makes me fly
because a bird is free
Aah

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Date: 6/29/2025 7:48:00 PM
David, you may never forgive me for this wisecrack, but were you at the ENT's office last week? -- Open wide. Say aah! ~ Full throated
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David Crandall
Date: 6/29/2025 7:54:00 PM
Haha, that's a good one - I think you're on to something. This poem reimagined as a dialog between me and the dentist.
Date: 6/29/2025 12:38:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your "Because" write. Very Creative... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away........
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David Crandall
Date: 6/29/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Paula!

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