beauty in flight

descending in air with delicate beauty the hawk floats freely

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Barthwell Farmer

Date: 4/15/2025 5:42:00 PM

Love the line-break on the second line in conjunction with the vividly expressed imagery. I see "the" as light as a word can get and with that sense of weightlessness receiving emphasis placed at the end of a line along with the emphasis on the role it plays mid-sentence in that the sentence is still forming without having yet landed on the impact of its meaning, it becomes reflective through language of that floating sensation of the bird on air, mid-flight. Reminds me of when I watched hawks.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/22/2024 1:02:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a great day writing away...............

Karen Croft
Date: 10/22/2024 2:05:00 PM

Thank you, have a great night