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Bare Naked Hostel

bare naked hostel consumed by the flames of lust — her existence moot 7/7/2019 Senryu about Greed, Lust or Loss. Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 5/7/5 per howmanysyllables.com

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Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2019 12:05:00 PM
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Metaphorically expressive and creative, Kim. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 1:45:00 PM
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Thank you, Paul!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/16/2019 10:42:00 PM
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Just dazzling ... Congratulations, Kim ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 1:45:00 PM
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Thanks, Probir!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/16/2019 6:47:00 PM
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Great use of metaphor, Kim. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 1:44:00 PM
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Thank you, Janice!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2019 6:08:00 PM
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Great title It really raises interest! Congrats on the win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2019 1:44:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/16/2019 8:37:00 AM
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A sad situation many find themselves in and they just seem to sink deeper. Congratulations on your win Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 1:06:00 PM
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So true! I believe you read this truer than most.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/16/2019 12:16:00 AM
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Wow Kim. Great. Congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 5:58:00 AM
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Thank you, Jeanne!
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 7/15/2019 9:42:00 PM
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Hi Kim, well thought out words,.. Conveys your message clear. Congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 5:59:00 AM
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Thank you, Debjani!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/15/2019 7:31:00 PM
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Hi Kim, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/16/2019 5:59:00 AM
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Thank you, Alexis!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 7/15/2019 7:14:00 PM
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I like your senryu twists, Kim. That was a silver one) Congrats.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 7:17:00 PM
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Thank you, Kurt!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/15/2019 6:49:00 PM
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Kim, congratulations on your winning placement with your catchy senryu!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/15/2019 7:11:00 PM
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Thank you, Tania <3 Kim
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Jack Horne
Date: 7/9/2019 1:03:00 PM
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love this clever write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2019 1:26:00 PM
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Thank you, Jack!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/8/2019 11:42:00 AM
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Hey! Goid luck this is well done, indeed, People do find themselves again. One can recreate ones life. I have seen this over and over. But I got the picture. Panagiota
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2019 2:07:00 PM
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Thanks, Panagiota!
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Winged Warrior
Date: 7/8/2019 9:17:00 AM
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'Bare naked'... it's a bit chilly now...and where can you buy 'flames of lust' lol...great take my friend...sending warm blankets lol...^WW^ :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2019 2:06:00 PM
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Thank you, WW!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/7/2019 6:37:00 PM
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You captured the lust and loss brilliantly, Kim! Great write! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 8:20:00 PM
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Thank you, Laura!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2019 5:08:00 PM
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very sad indeed Kim:-( hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 6:00:00 PM
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So sad!
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Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/7/2019 4:58:00 PM
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Kim, I like my Scotch neat and senryu, now naked... but heart can't take it. I enjoyed your fun filled frolicking poem! -Richard
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 6:00:00 PM
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Thank you!
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/7/2019 4:23:00 PM
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Hi Kim, Good entry for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck of in the contest:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 4:24:00 PM
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Thank you, Alexis! Hugs...Kim
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Harry Horsman
Date: 7/7/2019 3:52:00 PM
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Is she still around?, Fiery senryu, love it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 3:55:00 PM
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The her can be viewed as the hotel as well as the woman...the sadness of the situation.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/7/2019 3:23:00 PM
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By lustful and envious eyes I suppose...Nice imagery...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/7/2019 3:24:00 PM
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Thanks, Arturo!

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