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Autumn

Looking out from inside, the sun's rays are deceiving. Upon stepping outdoors, one sees themselves breathing. A cool crisp air clings to everything around. Shedding trees dead red leaves dance the hardening ground. There's a scent in the air; a musk of earth's decaying attire. It Brings to mind thoughts of wood stoves, hot cocoa, and cider. Autumn has taken hold, its colors so beautiful and bright. But nipping right at its heels is winter's steely bite.

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Date: 9/20/2021 11:19:00 AM
Very creative and unique Josh especially the last couplet. Congratulations on your win. All the best!
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Date: 9/19/2021 3:49:00 PM
wonderful imagery I love the opening lines - and can picture a frosty morning where i see my breath, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/16/2021 2:35:00 AM
THANKS for sharing this. It is my prayer that you will have the radiance of hope offered by God, as well as His gift of eternal life, according to John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Welcome to PS. God bless you.
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