Astray

Day by day.
Another look at the gray.
Slowly drifting astray.
Watch as I decay.
Shall we replay?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Skywalker Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 9:19 AM
Nice one!Short but meaningful! :) Hopefully we'll see it turn into a full poem! :)
Earp Avatar
December 26, 2012 at 4:02 PM
This is a reply to both of you. Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was good or not, but I have a few others that I may post. They're mainly short and sad. haha
Posey Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 2:39 AM
Welcome, let me be the first to comment on your work...... Very promising.... I will read more as you post. Talent is evident. Nice initial poem.....Write on!! ... Jake
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