Apparition of Grief.

Alone where the pavement butt the curve
A crumpled form rummaging her legacy
Of old paper bags and plastic, her nerve
Frayed shaking hands urged by immediacy
Plunged about like a frantic memory. Flies
Cannot wait, and whiz from eye to to dish
Disposable, each ear buzz her head defies
Seems the rejection of her state for a wish
Dried up and scattered like her broken things.
Heart wasped by the vision, feel deep stings
Of agony here, for in earth's richest country
I, a third world child, should not ever see
This deplorable depths of need, yet again I
Must admit, the pit does not vomit up poor
Broken people who are black. I only sigh
Since her one son died defending this whore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/29/2009 11:09:00 AM
very powerful my dear, and the images you invoke with your words always puts us in all kinds of places, each of which we enjoy no matter how tragic. an excellent piece, thanks so much for your comments, lots of love madison
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:49:00 AM
I felt this one L'nass,...very well ! Great write ! james
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Date: 6/3/2009 2:56:00 PM
strong and deep heartfelt emotions ---Apparition of Grief
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Date: 6/3/2009 10:48:00 AM
This was strength from the opening bell to the last sentence..such force with your words that creates emotions from the depths.
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Date: 6/3/2009 10:45:00 AM
Powerful write, L'nass. A mood compass; images fly about as though they are the needles. We were in Montreal one day and saw a woman rummage through the garbages. I gave money to my son to give to the woman, but she wouldn't accept it. She told him, "I'm a bum and not a beggar!". I'll never forget that. She had her own code of ethics, I felt embarrassed by our gesture. Wonderfully executed write...you always amaze me! Blessings to you...Love, Mikki
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