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Anchored - El

Anchored by my roots below
I hug the earth, whilst I grow
Stretching upward to the sky
Welcomed by the sun, thereby
Raindrops pool beneath my leaves
Plants rejoice, but my soul grieves
Anchored by my roots below


Elemental Poetry Contest
July 8th, 2021

Copyright © Avery Won | Year Posted 2021

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Charles Messina Date: 7/31/2021 5:38:00 AM Great write with superb rhythm and flow, Avery...Congratulations on your fine win! Charlie Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 8/1/2021 10:30:00 AM Thanks Charlie :)

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/31/2021 4:36:00 AM Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement! Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 8/1/2021 10:29:00 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/9/2021 4:11:00 PM awesome imagery and you showed all three elements. Fantastic. Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 7/9/2021 5:53:00 PM Thanks Andrea :)

Sam Kauffman Date: 7/8/2021 11:23:00 AM Ahh, the ying and the yang of the tree. Well done Avery. Best wishes for the contest. Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 7/8/2021 11:56:00 AM Thank you, Sam :)

Jan Allison Date: 7/8/2021 10:00:00 AM excellent entry for the contest theme:-)hugs jan xx Login to Reply Avery Won Date: 7/8/2021 10:04:00 AM Thank you :)