Notes About The Poem
an erotic bike ride
as we rode along,
she said she
wished that she
was my bike
that she liked
how I pedaled
an i turned to her
and said,
i wished she was
my pedal
that i liked
how she pumped
and when we arrived
at the bike rack—smiling
we both secretly
wished that it was a bed
where we would
one day
rack it all up:-
an erotic bike ride
an erotic bike ride
as we rode along,
she said she
wished that she
was my bike
that she liked
how i pedaled
and i turned
to her
and said,
i wished she was
my pedal
that i liked
how she pumped
and when we arrived
at the bike rack
smiling
we both secretly
wished that
it was a bed
where we would
one day
rack it all up
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