Alpine Park

Our children’s laughing voices animated the alpine air.
The scene was a park carved from a forest for a clearing.
We took them there for the swings—and a fanciful bear.
'Twas burnt summers ago, when we were child-rearing.

One autumn noon when shadows are like thoughts—long
My wife and I resolved to revisit our family’s alpine retreat.
Swings were gone, but “Higher, Daddy!” echoed as a song
And so did “I’m hungry, Mom, when will it be time to eat?”

We breathed deeply, sighed sadly, mulling vanished years
And asking anew if we did all we could to raise them right.
But the idyllic scene that encompassed us calmed our fears
And every nagging doubt was laid to rest that autumn night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Allison Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Its is so lovely to revisit somewhere from the past and recall the memories but also to make precious new ones:-) great write Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx
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October 31, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Oh Paul believe me my friend you are too too kind with your praise - I have only been writing since February and I have so so so much to learn and I learn more every day with every poem I read. Hugs Jan xxx
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October 31, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Jan, Your name is synonymous with poetic excellence; consequently, your words of praise fill me with gratitude. Thank you for your ever-gracious, ever meaningful support.
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