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All That Was Sparta

Our lusty voice was in the tramp of narrow, winding,
     Scree-littered, deep-rutted roads;     
 Ravens, uttering guttural croaks, slow-wheeling above      
   Vast, resonating, steeply plunging gorges;     
Ever watchful: ragged wings as spread fingers splayed;           
     Stretched out below: the flat, purple skies.  
 Men, when heartened by that which might be cherished unto
   Cold marble stone,
 Following the bearers sacred light; those brightly 
    Lit torches                
      And blazing campfires preserved by a flame Spartans 
 Believed could not ever die...  
    But, tragically, in this, for fierce Sparta...we 
      Were wrong.                
  Now all that remains of Sparta's defiant spirit is in 
     Half-forgotten song...  
  I hear them in troubling dreams; a sadness manifest in
   My every slowed exhalation of the inexplicable, involuntary sigh!


Obscured shrouds of clammy scarlet in the  greyed-misting's;
     Dampening's in dew-soaked morns. Hitched-up unfurling         
 Reinforcing, what was already, the grim personification,
   That dreadful assuredness, of certain death.                 
Those hammering alloys: when they moved -- the very 
     Mountainside shook!          
 Resolute camaraderie amidst awakening comrades; rising in  
   Oceanus, radiant Helios prepares to drive; the curling     
 Of morning's chill vapours upon the shortened, steaming, 
    Laboring breath.     
       I, for one, have always passionately loved the rising 
 Dawn....the old sl*t took           
    Yet another prince for her pleasure no doubt. In each 
      New dawning           
  Each man, in that fenced-off section of his undisclosed  
     Mind, ashamedly forming          
  Anxious thoughts; hands attentive to boastful wounds          
   Where keen metal had struck!


Yes, insatiable Eos, undeniably, has a beauty that alone 
     Is only hers;      
 She, rose-tinged Goddess, whose drab chariot paces 
   Gently over              
A far-slung, shrunken horizon, is, be it only just at this 
     Moment...quite beautiful.    
 How I did'st always welcome an ushering-in of another 
   Newly made day; and birds,       
 Re-empowered at morning call, flagrantly answering from 
    Tree to tree; swooping plovers,        
      Mewing over thin marsh grasses, plunging and swerving 
 Until,                
    Or so it seemed -- they should outrun the swift wind 
      Itself! But we who were set 
  To destruction did put away all such idle thoughts. 
     We, they who had kept      
  Faith with Spartan ideals, then roused us up, mixed     
   Wine with flour; drank libations for the fickle Gods goodwill.    


The months rolled up as one; the blurring of Springtime 
     Sneaking into Summer.        
 Pouring into the warming air, odours from barley, onions, 
   Cheeses and salted meats;          
Straining oxen, burgeoning shoulders bunched, heaving upon 
     Creaking carts;       
 Following behind, a stream of artisans; on occasion 
   A richly stained, streaked and glowing, sinewy runner        
 Stepping out from the column to disappear into the glare 
    Of shimmering heat  
      That sapped unto and pulled upon our strength...
 It seemed as if all the weary day we marched.     
    The only men in the world for whom war brought a respite 
      From the training  
  For war; soon the ritualistic oiling of limbs, a careful, 
     Symbolic arranging 
  Of long, plated hair -- the oncoming battle which gladdened 
   Our steadfast hearts!      


A young goat, before onslaught, sacrificed to 
     Artemis Agrotera; entrails 
 Examined for favourable omens. Flesh of ram and 
   Sheep offered to Zeus:-  
Him whom emblazoned upon impregnable hoplites; an Eagle,  
     Opposite to the throne,  
 Hungry to tear at the exposed ribs of corpses; and, not  
   Forgetting - "Them"! "Them" who must again prevail;    
 Is there any other choice other than death? Therefore -- 
    Let loose          
      The shackled Titans!!! A trumpeting of salpinges, 
 The spontaneous, eerie moans     
    From flute and pipe, the thumping tympanon -- 
      Massed panic amidst rising fear!
  The bronze wall of indestructible armour bristling with 
     Lance and spear;       
  The tightly packed Phalanx; the stabbing...deathly cries...
   The horrid groans.


This is all they shall ever know of Sparta...because what 
     More is there to know?
 The scattered ranks. Wide eyed, snorting, galloping 
   Horses with nostrils flared     
Charging across the breeze! Men, headlong and stumbling, 
     Flailing beneath       
 Many flashing hoofs; spilt blood, red as our fluttering 
   Cloaks, that pools and flows 
 Like a slaughtered bullock's. Now the shattered land; 
    Those whom shared      
      In this butchery pursue not the vanquished, 
 But, rather, indulge a brief                           
    Homage to the palm branch Goddess; it is she who 
      Inscribes the victorious   
  Upon her shield. The sudden quietening; the somber falling 
     In; the fallen, glorified dead. For what was left of us...        
  Grateful ruminations. And only I alone noted the yellowing 
   In a single, downward traipsing leaf. 


       But, oh! Oh, Sparta...if you had but only ever known...........

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Date: 6/5/2019 4:05:00 AM
Sounds like 300 to me my dear john! I do love reading your words but I must admit I do prefer when you read it to me! Lol you speak as if you came from that time! Ah to go back I would wish to live in Sparta and be the warrior I can be not like the men but as a true warrior women would! See let me stop! Love this John can not wait to read more! And I might have to rent the movie 300 now lol! All my affection B
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/11/2019 9:22:00 PM
Ah then until next we talk John!;)
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John Fleming
Date: 8/5/2019 2:17:00 PM
Thank you, Warrior Princess! You know of course how much I value your comments. Any time you would like a private reading just drop me a line...I would always make time for yourself. Lots of warm affection! :) john
Date: 4/2/2019 4:19:00 PM
This poem is exquisite John! Your words sing to me with indescribable notes. Your attention to detail boggles the mind. I am so happy your muse has returned to you. This poem is beyond impressive, it is a spectacular work of art! Have a wonderful Easter John! : ) xxoo
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