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Alice And Peter Pan

Alice held flowers in her hand, So huge were they, 'twas tough to stand, She collected them all herself, The bouquet was for her bookshelf, Walking with them proved so tricky, Her hands hurt and they were sticky, She didn't see where she was going, Her steps they were slowly slowing, Peter Pan saw her and he smiled, He knew how to get her all riled, He bumped into Alice, she fell, A shower of flowers and well, Alice, with Peter was angry, Asked him to pick 'em up for free, Peter Pan did as told by her, For he was scared of her anger, He went till her house holding them, My, they were huge with their big stem, Alice was happy, her job done, She hugged Peter and made him run.
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Date: 8/18/2024 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative nursery rhyme. I enjoyed reading it. Have a blessed day/week....................
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Date: 8/18/2024 10:23:00 AM
Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
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Date: 7/26/2024 3:13:00 PM
Love the back and forth between Alice and Peter Pan! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 7/25/2024 6:20:00 AM
Dear Joanna, What a wonderful whimsical journey with Alice and Peter Pan! I hope that I am not overreading this but I feel that you explore deep philosophical questions about growing up, the nature of time, identity, and human relationships, all while maintaining a light-hearted and whimsical tone. I think it is great!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/24/2024 6:30:00 AM
Cute mashup Joanna.
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