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Addled Longing

Sweet pain within the soul to be around peeps assorted… Seems would never be filled with the heart unloved… It makes no odds if I heed you with some desire… Making a point I turn up to be a dark outsider… Unalike way you would understand the untold tale… I certitude your heart not to be cold as “storm hail”… In fits and starts you go ahead like you care… No matter if your love for me is sham or sincere… By - Gautam Dated on – 11th Oct 2015

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Date: 11/21/2015 8:43:00 PM
wonderful thought..loved it :)
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:26:00 AM
No matter if your love for me is sham or sincere?!! Doesn't it matter?? I wonder.. ;) Nice read Gautam..God bless
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Mr Gautam
Date: 11/21/2015 12:13:00 PM
It matters when the affection is from the both sides....but sometimes the love is unconditionally blind. And even if someone hurts you...it gives u a kind of pain...which makes u learn to bear the pain of love.

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