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A Vision She Seeks

Through her eyes- a vision she seeks; Over and over- Her thoughts repeat; Analyzing a future, That may already be bleak. Fearing the peak- So very often, She does not sleep; Her restless eyes grow weak. A women so fierce and strong- Though now she weeps; Not aware that I'm watching- So out it seeps. The pain that she harbors inside- Intensified, By what her thoughts had verified. I watch her giving heart- And observe her habit of self sacrifice; And I know on her its hard, And I see that she's immobilized- As the loneliness rots her insides. A certain depth that lives within her; An undiscovered truth; I watch, as she pleads adventure- Escape from a painful youth.

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Date: 1/7/2014 11:33:00 AM
I like it, it's intriguing! Were you talking about yourself when writing it, by chance?
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John Long
Date: 1/7/2014 5:48:00 PM
The only one who caught on... I'm honored.
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Carly Larkin
Date: 1/7/2014 5:22:00 PM
Yes I was actually. I think you are the only one who caught onto that
Date: 12/27/2013 6:58:00 PM
Wow in many ways this write relates to me on levels one would not realize, great work here. loved it very much may read it again some time if that is alright, cheri
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