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I was an illustrious, nuclear physicist, and I was studying the strong force, Holding together building blocks of all atoms, as stars hold to their course. That force joins roaming quarks, which neutrons and photons are made of; And it also holds together photons and neutrons, like subatomic true love. This produces the atomic nucleus, allowing for all element producing ability. I loved studying these dynamics, which create matter's underlying stability. Fashionable friends and I were like birds of a feather, on fancy Friday eves, When we hit the feverish town of flashing lights, as red sun began to leave. Fine, fretful family finally visited me, after furious, fateful storms had fled; And pink-orange sun beamed warmly, to chase away all raven, dark dread. I lived in the house of dancing pearly moon, at the dark side of mellow sun, Awash in mystic, milky memories, much featured in ghostly, dream visions. The sea's sounding surf was steadily heard, on my silver maple lined street; And mermaids swam in greenest depths, in buttery daydreams, bittersweet. Neighbors grew nasturtiums like I never knew, in many rich, natural colors, Never failing to bring a nice bouquet, bestowing vivid joy to plum summers. A duskiness shy sun was westering, when bronzed days had grown too old; And fragrant, lavender fields bore wild joy, under creamy clouds that rolled. The woodland ball was graced by Queen Anne's lace, as stars afar sparkled; And 'yes' was giving nature's favored word, as magenta songbirds marveled. I was walking on the beach one peach day, when the skies rapidly darkened; And roaming wind and waves went wild as one, like a grievance unpardoned! I rushed up the dunes to higher ground, and to that cellar of beloved home, For a furious hurricane was upon us, a time of thunder, rain, wind and foam! I passed my favorite crimson rose, as I hurried inside my broad, oaken door. Then, I felt a sudden twinge of sadness, thinking I might never see it more. The awful weather raged for hours, like shriek winds hurling colored leaves; And as red deserts endure dry spells, I rode out the storm, lashing the eaves! The will to live is also a strong force. Both red rose and I survived unscathed, And neighbors also escaped major damage, like marmalade sky, sun bathed. The most fragile of things can be the mightiest, like flowers in the sidewalks, For in life, little things are everything, from purple butterflies, to nighthawks.

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Date: 2/18/2024 5:09:00 PM
I liked this story of fragile flowers. Things do eventually turn out OK. It was an exciting journey.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2024 7:31:00 PM
I was so happy to share the journey with you. Many thanks for your kind words. :)
Date: 2/18/2024 9:48:00 AM
"The most fragile of things can be the mightiest!" What an amazing observation, Evelyn! I love your story poems so full of color and unique, vivid images that express your poem with poetic impact! On a visit to LA, when going from one freeway to another, I saw a tomato plant growing from a crack at the side of the offramp! No water. No food. But, there is was thriving with tomatoes! You are indeed the poet with the verbal paintbrush! Thank you! Sending you many blessings my friend!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2024 7:28:00 PM
Thank you for your warm words of joy and inspiration, my friend. That tomato plant must have been quite a sight! Nature is full of surprises. I hope your week is wonderful. :)
Date: 2/18/2024 9:22:00 AM
Your physic diction is wonderful. As usual plenty of imagery, colors and ideas make this a wonderful poem. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/18/2024 7:08:00 PM
I find science fascinating, and I love writing about it. Thank you very much for your enthusiastic response to this tale. Hugs.
Date: 2/17/2024 7:48:00 PM
What an amazing blend of science fiction, alliteration!! and imagination. A FAVE for me, Evelyn. Thank you.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2024 8:02:00 PM
I am so pleased to know this tale resonated with you, Gershon. Thank you so much for your gratifying remarks, and also for your kind fave. And you are welcome. Sharing is such fun! :)
Date: 2/17/2024 1:05:00 PM
- An interesting profession, Evelyn - You always color your poem so beautifully - And you are absolutely right about the little things in life :) - Love it :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2024 5:51:00 PM
I am am very happy to read your thoughtful kind remarks, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for the lift. hugs and blessings. :)
Date: 2/17/2024 11:42:00 AM
"A Strong Force" is a wonderful strong write/story with a great ending. WOW!!! A nuclear physicist to a wonderful/creative writer. Great Job... Have a wonderful day/week to come...............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2024 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for the great pleasure of reading your warm, appreciative response. May your week to come be blessed.
Date: 2/17/2024 10:14:00 AM
In great detail your poem paints a rich tapestry of imagery and experiences, taking the reader on a journey through the life of an illustrious nuclear physicist and the world that surrounds them. The use of vivid language and detailed descriptions creates a sense of immersion and depth, inviting the reader to explore the nuances of the speaker's life and surroundings.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2024 11:04:00 AM
Your kind remarks are so uplifting. I offer my heartfelt thanks for your warm words of esteem. Blessings. :)
Date: 2/17/2024 5:53:00 AM
Awesome conclusion in your ending lines, Evelyn: The most fragile of things can be the mightiest, like flowers in the sidewalks, For in life, little things are everything... so true and well said. Your opening lines brought to fore recent news on Russia developing nuclear weapon to destroy satellltes with energy waves.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/17/2024 10:52:00 AM
I believe the strong force is so aptly named. Thank you for your delightful comments. I hope your weekend is nice. :)

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