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A Rhyming Wave Poem - a Childhood Memory

Nightingales, a pair, dueting, A pair, dueting, dueting. Music, beauty, unrelenting. Music, true love it stirred. They sang with passion, true love flared, Old true love, true love, true love flared. Touching where only true love dared. Touching, old tender hearts. Late childhood, yes, watching mum, dad, Yes, watching, watching, watching dad. A secret still, man, I am glad! A secret, oh, what if? Nightingales, a pair, dueting, A secret, oh, what if? ______________________________________________________
04/24/18 ANY RHYME FORM - AN EARLY CHILDHOOD MEMORY - Poetry Contest, sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 4/25/2018 9:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mick, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/26/2018 3:14:00 AM
Many thanks Eve, appreciated... hugs Mick
Date: 4/25/2018 6:04:00 PM
This has a lovely melodic quality about it almost like a summer night. Congratulations.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/26/2018 3:13:00 AM
Many thanks Sian, appreciated... Mick
Date: 4/25/2018 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this done of memories.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/26/2018 3:12:00 AM
Many thanks Susan, appreciated... Mick
Date: 4/25/2018 12:06:00 PM
A striking childhood memory, undulating through the corridors of a poetic mind. Regards // paul
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Date: 4/25/2018 10:42:00 AM
Very original and sweet. Congrats, Mick. Well penned.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/26/2018 3:11:00 AM
Many thanks Line, appreciated... Mick
Date: 4/24/2018 7:02:00 PM
This is very sweet, Mick. Hope to see you on the winners' list!
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Mick Talbot
Date: 4/26/2018 3:08:00 AM
Playing catch up, it did thanks Andrea, not sure on placement yet, but I well chuffed to see a new form for P.S, to be placed in a contest, woot, woot! Mick

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