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A Prayer.

The soldiers came to start a fight, in the hours, of the night. I saw the harm that they have done, with the barrel of a gun. A splash where once there was a face, spattered flesh around the place. Demolished walls that pile up high, Give foreground to the moonlit sky. A ruptured vein is spraying forth, he grips his wound for all he’s worth. Grit and stone crunch under foot, a demon stalks with tell-tale cloot. How can it be, that I am here. when everything, I hold so dear, is far, far, far beyond my reach, unfettered world that I beseech!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/1/2011 2:38:00 PM
I must say this is a very good write. Great job.
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:36:00 PM
I believe this style could be classified a Quatrain... Keep em comin my friend... I feel you in this prayer.....:JP]
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:20:00 AM
The discription is wonderful. Lots of feeling. Puting your soul into a poem like this. is just a begingin an a wounderful bliss thank fo what you have wrote it touched my heart without a doubt The ppoem is great. Keep up the good work.=]
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Date: 1/4/2010 5:12:00 PM
morbid reflection well done... I like it
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Date: 1/1/2010 2:52:00 PM
Very deep.Thanks for sharing and for the kind comment.Teresa
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Date: 12/29/2009 11:42:00 AM
Awesome write! Thanks for your comment about my husband, yes I believe that he is the head, but he is reminded that it should not go to his head, lol! Keep writing my friend. Have prosperous new year, God bless you!
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Date: 12/19/2009 6:29:00 PM
forms quatrain...very good write..welcome to the soup! Light & Love
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Date: 12/14/2009 4:58:00 PM
Powerful image of the soldiers engaged in a gruesome battle, all the while longing for the life they left behind to go to war. Great work, David! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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