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Humpty Dumpty lived in make-believe land, like dreamy shadows get long; And he dwelt in a house near a wall, among merry, crimson, oriole throngs. He had a figure equally rotund and jolly, and was therefore loved by many; And made his living as an apt teacher, as Thursday learns from Wednesday. He helped the spirited children to learn, and also helped the children laugh, As roses in the sky govern dawn's path, in pearl moon's, riotous aftermath. Folks far and near visited Humpty, beneath azure skies of frequent friends; In lightning swift days of golden seasons, when fast-paced time never ends. Fond family and Humpty led fairy tale lives, in fine, olden days of fateful fall; And loved other seasons too, on the minty lawns, that hours tardily crawled. He lived in the house of beautiful gardens, surrounded by high, stone walls, Where multicolored flowers were residing, like red sunsets the heart recalls! A broad road rambled on the wall's other side, lined by red robin, jade trees; And rabbits and deer frequented nearby woods, in sight of yellow honeybees. Neighbors paid nightly visits, when noticed, natal moon wore natural pearls; And nectarine sun was only newly departed, leaving pretty, colorful whorls. Japanese bloodgrass lay wounded, when sun and silver moon changed places; And belladonna engaged in lovely deceit, in a pink dawn of pretty, cloud laces. Summer cloaked wolf eyes dogwood blooms, in grape and saffron sunbeams; And hydrangealicious roses aped namesakes agleam, red under moonbeams. Humpty's favorite pastime was watching the sunup, for he was an early riser. He would sit atop his garden wall, as deep plums and magentas grew lighter. But, one day, unseen calamity occurred, as a swarm of honeybees attacked; After he brushed a trailing bough, disturbing one big honeycomb, on impact! Poor Humpty was stung multiple times, and toppled off the wall into the road; And was yet lying very still, when the King's entourage saw him, and slowed. As the King noted Humpty's serious condition, he called for his own physician. He said, 'This man's leg is crushed, and it will never be quite the same again!' 'Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, Humpty Dumpty had a great fall,' in red dawn; As he laid bruised and broken, no one knew if Humpty would be out for long! So horses bore Humpty Dumpty to his house, being led to it by one passerby; And a woman was hired to nurse him, as the doctor returned often, that July. With all the vigilant care, Humpty recovered, but never to climb or run more; And could walk but very slowly; finding other ways, a diamond sun to adore! 'All the King's horses and all the King's men, couldn't put Humpty together again.' Like joys of elegant, little things which comes, after experiencing great pain.

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Date: 6/16/2024 11:47:00 PM
You kept this poem alive right til the end Evelyn. Seamless and unique. I wonder if you have started a trend to look a anew at nursery rhymes. Kind regards David in NZ
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/17/2024 9:16:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful compliments, David. I would be happy if I did start such a trend.So glad you enjoyed this tale.
Date: 6/4/2024 11:48:00 AM
What a creative/wonderful write/story with a great/fun picture. Love This One. Yes, life does bring pain....  Have a great day...................
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Date: 6/4/2024 9:30:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your comment, Paula. Thank you so much. Blessings.
Date: 6/2/2024 11:24:00 AM
A perfect happy boy. That's all we need to be happy, the right things and people around us. Great story Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/2/2024 7:41:00 PM
So true, Tonye. Helping hands make the world go 'round. Thank you very much.
Date: 6/1/2024 9:34:00 AM
Your version of Humpty Dumpty excels. Very well put. Loved the flowers too. Blessings,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/1/2024 9:19:00 PM
Your gracious words bring happy smiles. Thank you very much.
Date: 6/1/2024 6:14:00 AM
I found the retelling of the Humpty Dumpty story to be quite engaging, Evelyn. The closing advice given to Humpty was particularly insightful, and I sincerely hope that he can find healing and happiness.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/1/2024 9:18:00 PM
I'm happy that you found this tale to be engaging. Thank you for your remarks, which are so delighting. Have a nice weekend.
Date: 6/1/2024 3:35:00 AM
Love this Evelyn....such a creative, fun ,happy write!! Debx
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/1/2024 9:13:00 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your warm response, Deb. Kindest regards.
Date: 6/1/2024 1:14:00 AM
i really love the life of Humpty Dumpty , this is a great fun to read, happy week end evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/1/2024 9:11:00 PM
I appreciate your kind thoughts, Yann. Thank you for sharing them with me. Best wishes.
Date: 5/31/2024 8:21:00 PM
I enjoyed the refurbished Humpty Dumpyy story. That ending statement was a good advice to Humpty. I hope he is healed and happy.
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Date: 5/31/2024 10:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for the happy thoughts, Hilda. I'm glad you enjoyed the tale. Many blessings.

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