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A Needle In the Hay

A needle in the hay lost in your prime seduced by the streets by a promise, sublime pulsating ignorance strung out in despair a poetic life gone struck down in his lair did you know how far you walked all alone? calling out to the voices you travelled too far from home chaos of occlusion your fantasy became hell where you think your okay you CAN'T safely dwell determined to be alone determined to be quiet the stench in the alley your own personal riot I am here. I can't leave do not shut me out your pain inside hides your pilot, self-doubt get up, stand up dig yourself from the hay it's never too late tomorrow IS a new day don't let them take you a life once bright, gray you don't have to be buried a needle in the hay haunted by the melody a needle in the hay
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, March 1, 2012 for Needle in the Hay contest (Dana'lynn Smith)

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Date: 6/1/2012 1:51:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2012 10:52:00 AM
Love this Rhonda, there are many wonderful poet here on soup, you are amongst the best of them, awesome poem. good luck in contest. harry
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:37:00 PM
I wouldnt know how to go about writing about this topic. But I love the way you have dont it. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 3/1/2012 6:41:00 AM
The best to you in the contest Rhonda. You are on the ball. Love, Carol
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