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A Lofty Precipice

In 2028, the votes were tallied and the winner announced. The loser had been trounced by a good woman of the people. Soon, epaulets came into her office and other shiny suits so fine as the new President's eyes did shine in warm greeting. These men quickly cut her smile telling her how the world was to be for the power was not hers, you see. She was their marionette. They would pull the strings as they had for many, many years manipulating human fears throughout the world. Many more were hidden never in the public view in fact, the President never knew the extent of their realm. So she sat at her desk highly crowned and ordained never showing the disdain she felt from her lofty precipice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/25/2010 5:12:00 PM
Dear Sue, Thanks for your comment and the welcome. You probably welcomed me before because I remember reading your poems. My last poem is a somewhat drastic solution to writer’s block, as a friend said. I just read your poem, A Lofty Precipice. I found it highly original, and reading between the lines, I saw the cynicism. How right you are, and what a dreadful job the presidency must be! Well done. Love, Amy
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:50:00 PM
President Sara Palin.
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Date: 11/7/2009 12:43:00 PM
Your piece desribes my way of thinking in this matter perfectly. It's going into my favorites. Bravo, Sue! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:10:00 PM
You are very observant and see quite clear in my opinion. A very nice write, thought sad reality it describes. I feel many are just like today, moody or sad and I read it the poems I just read. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 11/6/2009 12:28:00 PM
Interesting political views here. Keep writing. Sara
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