A Gin-Swilling Riverboat Captain Tb

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glare eye to eye
gin ship lie stuck
spent idle lost


11/25/20202


Than-Bauk Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina


A Than-Bauk poem consists of 3 lines.
Each line consists of 4 syllables.
The last syllable of the 1st line,
 The 3rd syllable of the second line
 And the 2nd syllable of the third line.

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/7/2020 2:42:00 PM

Good one Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2020 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Eye to eye, wonder what they were thinking. Love the write and pictures. Enjoy your win with blessings.....................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/5/2020 9:19:00 PM

Love your nod to the "African Queen," Eve. Congratulations!

Loving Kindness

Date: 12/5/2020 4:09:00 AM

Wow, a great poem.Congratulation...! May you be well and happy...!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2020 3:48:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/4/2020 10:26:00 PM

This is so well done.. Congrats on your placement Eve. Have a great weekend. ~ Ani

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/4/2020 9:42:00 PM

Congrats on your win Eve!

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 12/4/2020 3:00:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve, on your placement for this clever piece!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/4/2020 2:46:00 PM

Hi Even, Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Enjoy your day and weekend:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 12/4/2020 1:17:00 PM

Very nicely done, Eve. The African Queen is one of my favorite old-time movies. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Stay well dear friend.. Hugs Charlie