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A Dense Fog

a dense fog followed the rain like the billowing steam of a locomotive train yet the fog never left me just denser, insane

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Date: 4/8/2024 11:09:00 AM
Great metaphor! Get out of the fog, sweet poet.
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Date: 4/8/2024 6:59:00 AM
...could just be a dust trail .... left by an aging tumbleweed
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