A Dense Fog

   a dense fog 
    followed the rain

   like the billowing steam
    of a locomotive train 

   yet the fog never left me
    just denser, insane

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Date: 4/8/2024 11:09:00 AM
Great metaphor! Get out of the fog, sweet poet.
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Date: 4/8/2024 6:59:00 AM
...could just be a dust trail .... left by an aging tumbleweed
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