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A Brief Encounter

...inspired by 'The Meaning Of Life' by Allen Tate Breezes blow, the lark sings sweet, there's magic in the air, yet a sense of something rumbling. On the surface we are carefree, yet beyond there's someone mumbling. The sacraments we live by are a solace to our souls and humbling, yet the grumbling never hesitates to aggravate, thus crumbling our composure. A cruel word may damage us, so, safe in our cocoons we hide. The everyday's a constant 'til a brief encounter weakens us, the pain will leave its mark as we go tumbling to a sense of insecurity, what price that loose remark?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 8:37:00 AM
WOW, this really speaks to me. It is a lot of what I felt behind the meaning of my rondea of a Great Unease. This is just fantastic. a fave poem. I'm going to go see if I ever faved you as a poet yet!!
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:53:00 PM
i love the tricky way you incorporated all your "umbling" rhymes in this poem. very clever, keith! i also think there's a lot of truth in these words.
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:35:00 PM
Very true. Love the rumbling, mumbling that's grumbling! Tanya
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Date: 6/22/2012 1:06:00 PM
The birth of a Monarch! It think I spelled that right. Peace to you my friend.
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