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A (Haiku)

One golden ship sails Awash in peppermint dreams Powered by the wind

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Amy Swanson

Date: 2/8/2009 7:17:00 AM

I love this!!! So pretty... especially the peppermint dreams. :) Dreamy. Congrats on being featured! :) Blessings, Amy

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/5/2009 6:16:00 PM

Michael - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/3/2009 11:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 2/3/2009 5:18:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your haiku being featured this week. Vince

Donna Golden

Date: 2/1/2009 8:42:00 PM

I like your choice of colors here. ;-) DG

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/1/2009 4:58:00 PM

Can it be interpreted as a bite of a minty chocolate wrapped in golden foil and the sensation of coolness the pepermint gives you? That's my opinion :) Congrats for being featured this week!!! Love, iolanda

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/1/2009 4:49:00 PM

Can it be interpreted as a bite of a minty chocolate wraped in golden foil and the sensation of coolness the pepermint gives you? That's my opinion :) Congrats for being featured this week!!! Love, iolanda

Date: 2/1/2009 2:52:00 PM

The wonderful imagery conveys your thoughts in a creative way. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/1/2009 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/1/2009 10:27:00 AM

Michael what a wonderful Haiku congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)