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first love unexpected emotionally charged the outside world an afterthought just us 12/04/2011 Contest: Traditional Cinquain 10th Place

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2011 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations Wilma on your well deserved win in Catie's contest "Traditional Cinquain". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/17/2011 5:44:00 AM

Cogratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Wilma

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/16/2011 2:37:00 PM

Very nice win, Wilma. Charles

Jack Horne

Date: 4/16/2011 2:05:00 PM

Many congrats again, Wilma: )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2011 1:53:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your wonderful win in this contest luv.. more lovely words flowing from your creativity ... enjoy another top ten ..my friend..

Kash Poet

Date: 4/16/2011 1:21:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your win in the contest---kash

Kash Poet

Date: 4/13/2011 12:09:00 PM

Wonderful Cinquin describing first love,Wilma.Enjoyed.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2011 5:13:00 AM

Nothing else seems to matter when a couple fall in love for the first time, Wilma. This is an excellent entry for Frank's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/12/2011 1:19:00 PM

First love a memory we all have, and you have poured words into this one perfectly... I love the "Just us" line... love Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2011 12:09:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry today Wilma. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/12/2011 6:08:00 AM

ah this one is the stunning one missy ;) how wonderful to be in that bubble eh? ;D thanks for your inspiring comments in mine :) hugs your way :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 5:21:00 AM

mesmerizing lines Wilma.. that first love does it all the time.. unforgettable as your lovely line smy friend...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2011 5:15:00 AM

ahh, love is blind when romance runs high, sigh... well-carved piece so delightfully done, wilma... hope to see you on my side of this haven! my best winning wishes to you!