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27.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

when sweet and sour mixed the boot full of july rain - season's dole a fack a good day for ducks rippling rings in the puddle - water lily balm enters the gray zone a temporary cloudburst - the guardians guard drifting down the stream thunder rise and suther round - plaintive evening song

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Jean Murray

Date: 7/30/2023 2:04:00 AM

Lovely as always the unusual words in unusual ways Anna-Lise.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/29/2023 7:43:00 AM

A lovely collection of haikus, Anne-lise, I love your language:)

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/29/2023 6:44:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your haiku suite is full of such thoughtful and beautiful imagery! I really enjoyed reading them this morning !! Happy Saturday xxoo

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2023 8:05:00 AM

Anne-Lise your collection of Haiku exudes ethereal beauty, each verse encapsulating a fleeting moment of profound significance. The arduous task of selecting a favorite becomes an impossible feat, for every piece is meticulously crafted, leaving one spellbound.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/29/2023 12:41:00 PM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/28/2023 4:14:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Anne-Lise. Your photo is awesome!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 7:37:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/28/2023 3:01:00 AM

I like the line plaintive evening song. That little one looks as if he/she is having the time of their lives. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 3:05:00 AM

- Children are not too concerned about the weather ... always find something exciting .... many thanks for your words, Sara :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/27/2023 4:20:00 PM

this is lovely, anne-lise! adorable picture, too...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 3:03:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/27/2023 3:58:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, Oh such a lovey poem of nature. I will make it my fav. Hugs./Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/28/2023 10:45:00 AM

Hello Sunshine Smile, You are welcome. Hugs./Darlene\

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 3:02:00 AM

- Thank you for your nice comment and your fave of my poem, Darlene :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/27/2023 3:18:00 PM

A beautiful set of Haiku's Anne-Lise Each one capturing a precious moment. Hard to pick a favorite, but mine has to be the boot full of July rain. I think we have all experienced that when we were kids. Well done,

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 3:01:00 AM

- I loved puddles as a child, my boots were always wet :))) - Thanks for the nice comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Deb M

Date: 7/27/2023 2:16:00 PM

Hi Sunshine…..what a lovely poem and an adorable picture! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2023 2:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for the lovely comment, Deb :) - hugs