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love this idea for a wedding pic with maybe the sunset between us...prob have to be taken on the dock

- Erotic Lust -

~ The dance of love greets each gasp and kiss with lust ~














24.07.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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beautydancelovemonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2017 8:57:00 PM

So nice, Anne Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/31/2017 3:47:00 AM

- Thanks, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/30/2017 1:08:00 PM

Love it. I'm going to have to try this style:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/30/2017 1:13:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Debbie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/29/2017 1:26:00 PM

Great monoku Anne...best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/29/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Not for the contest, Joseph - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/28/2017 2:58:00 PM

so wise yet so true....cant expect anything else from you....I mean between your heart and pen, there is glue....so Beautifully artistic, no one needs a clue....if I could, stealing one of your pens is what I would do....just to see how it would inspire me along with the weed and the brew....lol....wonderful as always anne....;)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:06:00 PM

- Eric, many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/26/2017 4:23:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this gem. It is lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:06:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

Date: 7/26/2017 3:16:00 PM

It's lovey. Just as lust should be.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2017 12:55:00 AM

you are aflame, anne.. enjoyed this beauty, ohh.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 7/25/2017 10:57:00 PM

beautiful, Sunshine, it keeps the fire going ~*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/25/2017 4:44:00 PM

You have shown it well in this nice Monoku Anne Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:04:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/25/2017 3:46:00 PM

The blending of love and lust becomes a truly erotic dance, Anne-Lise! Superbly expressed. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:04:00 PM

- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 7/25/2017 9:35:00 AM

beautiful one liner Anne-Lise, what a beautiful dance it is also...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/28/2017 3:02:00 PM

- Many thanks, S.O. :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/25/2017 3:05:00 AM

What a wonderful monoku Anne-Lise, great description in such a few words...Maria xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2017 2:43:00 PM

- Many thanks Maria, a pleasure to share :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2017 12:59:00 AM

Superb Monoku Anne-Lise! : )

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2017 2:42:00 PM

- Many thanks, Connie :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dean Wood

Date: 7/24/2017 6:42:00 PM

It is hard for me to express much in such a short form but you have done a wonderful job! Really enjoyed this poem. - Dean

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2017 2:41:00 PM

- Many thanks, Dean :) - Glad you liked it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/24/2017 3:59:00 PM

What a spectacular write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome piece this afternoon as you brought a smile to my eyes by your incredibly warm poem! I loved this! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/25/2017 2:13:00 PM

- Many thanks Russell, a pleasure to share :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)