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Thirsty Water (Slightly Adult Content)

Thirsty Water I should have gone to work today but your tongue convinced me to come inside and play with you…to ride our red rocket ship to the distant planet of lust where our sensual sins are instantly forgiven and celebrated amidst mute pleas for gentle mercy so rightly ignored as a token gesture to rationality and begging for more is of course granted by the Court of No Regrets You alone have always held the secret key that released the chastised prisoner of passion locked deep inside of me your taste buds have caressed every morsel of my body as if I were an ice cube wrapped in honey much like the oyster swallowed whole to tease our ravaged pendulums whose demand for thirsty water shall be quenched at the moment our tongues mysteriously turn ice cold Irish Note Author Disclaimer: to my fellow poets....these are just words on a piece of paper and an experiment in new writing styles/expression for me. Topic is not meant to be abusive or disrespectful to ANY reader. Please note this poem is categorized by me in the 'Passion' category of PS.

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Date: 3/25/2010 4:14:00 PM
Irish, another super write > i like this block paragraph poetry type approach in your writing. Hey maybe i should patent this term - ha ha, even though it is a writing form as such. But not in poetry. Keep writing Irish > and i shall read >> James
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Date: 3/10/2010 10:31:00 PM
so nice to see the new ones you've written, looking forward to the book
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Date: 3/10/2010 5:44:00 PM
well chilli peppers have nothing on it!!! you go guy! don't be surprised if you catch a whiff or tar and see a stray feather fly through the air though! Light & Love
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:58:00 AM
Very warm sensual tones, I enjoy poetry that I have to read and read again, each time it unlocks a new understanding and takes me further into the passion..... 'your taste buds have caressed every morsel of my body' as if I were an ice cube wrapped in honey' Gosh I'm loving that line..... love your new expression Michael......Allie
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