Souper Sex Change

This Lil' poem had to change it's name With a title so lame nearly got sent to Soup's Hall of Shame! Never fear dude's on the poetic rise silky set a' verses new curves in them thighs you bet boys'll be rubber neckin' new flow's strapped like an automatic weapon Yep she's got new features but didn't cost six grand with a new set a' headlights give the new girl a hand!

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/8/2014 7:12:00 PM

Witty hilarious write..:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2012 3:15:00 PM

coming back to this one. Sure like this one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2012 11:27:00 PM

hahaha this was very entertaining, my friend. GREAT personification poem (unless it's YOU? heehee) You should enter this in contest of what you like about Soup. Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/12/2012 8:48:00 PM

you are great... and you know it...lol... but, i'm gonna say...oi! oi! oi!... good night,..p.d.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/12/2012 7:41:00 PM

Ha, ha, this is a very funny write Joey! I love how you have it going from the very start! From changing the name of a Poem to having a Souper Sex Change! Great idea! Awesome Work!!