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Sensual

Sensual as and so sensual is, When fire ignites, the dead have risse, You can’t keep down the passion earned, Over wrought, with rigid squirm, Heat and steam and vision blurred, Fascinated, and completely stirred Thought is gone, deep wanting heard, For meatballs this is grim, Is he about to swim, Or droopy has returned, Soul lit fire is searing burned, Until the right is sweetly termed, An interface of passion will, Stir solutions so instill, Estacy is very nice Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/21/2012 4:46:00 PM
yes sweet ecstasy is what this is Don ;}
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Date: 9/21/2012 1:39:00 PM
Okay Don...I got giddy when I'd read "dumb as duck trotting"! Oh, this is a passionate write, Don! No quacking happening here...sounds more like a rooster!:) Alright, I think this is a masterful write! I'd better get out of here, all I've been giving is "dumb as duck trotting comments".:( Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 9/21/2012 3:19:00 AM
nicely done Don..that's all I can say (^_^) Good day.
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Date: 9/21/2012 2:07:00 AM
well a most provocative piece of sensuality DON luv ..ecstasy is so very nice and this passionate expression warrants one a cold shower .. oooohh lala ..
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Date: 9/20/2012 8:13:00 AM
Oh yes Don, this will hit home, to many.. a wonderful poem of the way it is..
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Date: 9/20/2012 6:24:00 AM
Wow, quite the interesting and dynamic write my friend! I just love the intriguing and very delightful poem that you have written! I really enjoyed the tremendous write that I've read this morning! I really like the part of the line, "Soul lit fire..." that is a very awesome beginning of a line, you took poetry to new heights with that snippet! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:46:00 AM
You never fail to amuse and entertain me with your writes, laughed out loud at this piece. "Thought is gone, deep wanting heard, For meatballs this is grim, Is he about to swim, Or droopy has returned," Love your writes
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