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Lovely golden red-tinged leaves seem lost in conversation, Eloquently rustling as they flutter to the ground. Autumn’s breeze is whispering to them a revelation. Vanquished they are soon to be. Vanished – they will have no sound. Eerily the evening creeps, its shadows enveloping the trees. Stirring in the wind, the leaves now hiss as November’s grieves. Trembling are the leaves that on lush boughs once brightly swayed. Ashen is their world; murmuring with fear, crestfallen they lie, Longing for the green of summer, Knowing they soon will fade. . . . Inglorious is our end! Can you hear their forlorn cry? Now the wind is quiet, and the leaves have all grown still. Gone is Harvest Moon. First snow falls with a silent chill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/15/2016 11:07:00 AM
Being in touch with nature lifts the spirit to new heights Andrea. This poem is brilliantly written and so beautiful! Congratulations on having it honored with Poem the week! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/26/2016 2:24:00 PM
Great to see this on the list Andrea...congratulations
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Date: 10/26/2016 2:04:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful, Andrea. What feelings this has stirred in me. Top notch in my books. Elaine
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Date: 10/4/2016 10:58:00 PM
I am so happy to see that this lovely autumn poem was honored with poem of the week Andrea, especially after getting an NA! So well deserved! Congratulations! 7 ; )
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Date: 10/3/2016 3:41:00 PM
Awesome!! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/1/2016 7:43:00 PM
Great write and win Andrea...Congrats
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Date: 9/30/2016 10:52:00 PM
Andrea, Very wonderful write. You put lives in leaves here. A7 from me. Enjoyed................//hugs
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Date: 9/30/2016 1:49:00 PM
Andrea congrats on POTW with this beauty ~
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Date: 9/30/2016 12:32:00 PM
I'm delighted this is getting the recognition it deserved Andrea firstly POTW and now your top spot in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2016 8:06:00 AM
Very poetic! Huge Congrats!
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Date: 9/30/2016 7:40:00 AM
beautiful Andrea, congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/30/2016 6:27:00 AM
Congratulations on being chosen POTW. I love leaves and your Acrostic is so eloquent and insightful. Loved always, SuZ
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Agnes
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:39:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement Andrea!;0)
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:23:00 PM
Andrea, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:14:00 PM
Hi Andrea: A beautiful poem worthy of the POTW!
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Date: 9/28/2016 12:35:00 PM
Leaves talking and I like what you are saying. A picture perfect acrostic, beautiful. Great to see you featured as poem of the week : )
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:17:00 PM
My dearest Ghazalier/ sonnetier once again you have won a well deserved honor of having the poem of the week. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/27/2016 8:18:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This is such a well written acrostic. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was deserved. Enjoy the honor my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/26/2016 2:14:00 PM
Wonderful POTW! You said it just rightly.
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Date: 9/26/2016 6:19:00 AM
wonderful...congrats on being adjudged the poem of the week
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Date: 9/26/2016 4:59:00 AM
This one is very nice, with a 'chilling' end:) congratulations on Poem of the week:) great way to go, Andrea:) hope you are doing fine:)
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Date: 9/26/2016 1:50:00 AM
Many congrats on POTW:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2016 9:59:00 PM
Clever and beautifully written. Great job!
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:50:00 AM
Yaaaaaa!!! Awesome!! Great Job! I Love Your Art!!! 7!!
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