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Un-Suck

got to see first hand
just how tall my hunter stands
keeping family close

saw Wrenna Bird Girl 
hugs and kisses for us all
wonder what she knows

if her Mother Bird
has a clue of how much she 
means to all of us

repeat the issues
and they will just stay alive 
into the new arrive

time has sucked for all
then we learn to un suck them
part of growing true

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/20/2010 7:39:00 PM
a very interesting chain of haiku,,penned with heart and deep thought throughout,,Thank you for atopping by my words and leaving yours behind,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:37:00 PM
Enjoyed your multiple haikus on un-suck, Kristi
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Date: 8/16/2010 12:17:00 PM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Kristi. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:59:00 AM
Great Haiku in multiples Kristi.. works well .. enjoyed with luv..your special creativity..luv..
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