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Things That Don'T Suck

Gettin' laid Gettin' paid Givin' aid justice compassion freedom. eh? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ k, not really a haiku, but after I thought to stick the "eh?" in there it became 17 syllables... so sue me? \:D/

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Sidney Beck

Date: 10/10/2011 5:58:00 PM

gettin laid and gettin paid for it is best maybe?? .................... by stickin in "eh?" at the end it exposes you to accusations of being closet-canadian :-))

Nancy Jones
Date: 10/10/2011 5:59:00 PM

comes from years a livin' in Buffalo

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/8/2011 2:30:00 AM

Hey, no one will sue you, its great! Lee

Cory Long

Date: 10/8/2011 12:31:00 AM

i like the ring of this poem.. nicely done.. Free spirit