bondage

trapped in bondage
walked through doors unwillingly....
emotions work free

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Yann Rolland

Date: 5/31/2025 6:59:00 AM

so emotional haiku, deep feelings shared, enjoyed your creativity yann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/31/2025 1:13:00 PM

Thank you, Yann, for the encouraging review. Sara K

Reya Suri

Date: 5/30/2025 9:29:00 PM

This is emotional and intense, though it's quite short. I love the depictions of this! It's like an allegory!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2025 10:28:00 PM

Thanks for the nice review of my work, Reya. Yes, like an allegory. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/30/2025 1:58:00 PM

Oh, dear, Sara, this is just breathtaking; your art is awe-inspiring. Your imagery depicts how these emotions evolve. I enjoyed reading your poem.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2025 2:22:00 PM

Lasaad, I was speaking of bondage from emotions that build up inside of us because of what happens to us as we are growing up and we have no control of what is happening. Thanks for the understanding and nice review. Sara K

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/30/2025 10:22:00 AM

Trapped in bondage the soul can never be free, nicely penned Sara, if its for a contest gl

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2025 2:21:00 PM

Rose, sometimes when we are trapped, we work on it with the help of God and He will set us free. It is not easy though. It takes work. I did not do it for a contest though. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/30/2025 9:40:00 AM

How important emotions are especially in poetry.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/30/2025 2:16:00 PM

Yes, Victor, I agree. Sometimes we can read a poem that helps us see our way clear. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K