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We confess

From each node of form emanates divine bliss, being of course benediction of God’s grace, love’s heavenly caress, Divine Mother’s kiss, rapture sublime, holding us in close embrace. Our formless soul plunges into the abyss, wherein of wayward ego remains no trace, leaving pristine presence alone as the flame, now affirmed as claim to fame, in life’s end game.

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Silent One

Date: 5/16/2024 11:48:00 AM

Great use of form...

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/16/2024 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/16/2024 6:02:00 AM

Dear Seerker, your poetic genius unveils the profound mysteries of the divine, guiding the soul through sacred realms. Your artistic words are filled with enlightenment, where each verse a luminous thread connecting us to the formless essence within. What a masterful ode to spiritual awakening leaves one in reverent awe of the transformative power of poetry. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/16/2024 7:30:00 AM

I’m so delighted you found value in these words, Daniel dear. Thank you!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/16/2024 5:09:00 AM

the Ottava Rima form is a challenge for me, but yours is magnificent and filled with wisdom. You make it look easy. :-) I especially liked: Our formless soul plunges into the abyss, wherein of wayward ego remains no trace, Wishing you a blessed day!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/16/2024 7:29:00 AM

The Ottava Rima is a shortened sonnet, in a way, with alternate rhyming lines ending with a couplet and the 11 syllable per line rule, that’s all.