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The Raven and the Bard

This poetic exchange unveils a mesmerizing duel between literary titans Edgar Allan Poe and Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, whose contrasting styles mirrored their real-life rivalry. Poe's haunting verses drip with Gothic allure and primal terror, immersing us in the twisted depths where madness reigns supreme. Longfellow's radiant epics, in contrast, shed warm light on life's humble virtues—freedom, nature's beauty, and the resilient human spirit. 

The message, however, transcends this stylistic dichotomy. By combining their poetic dominions, my poem suggests that true wisdom lies in embracing the contrasting aspects of our existence.

Ultimately, the poem invites us to confront the full spectrum of the human experience - the madness and the dreams, the nightmares, and the radiant epics. It is an artistic view of life's contrasts, where waking visions and insanity intertwine, leaving a legacy "emblazed in Darkest Love's fell script, yet by hope's radiant lines forever lit."

Poe and Longfellow become metaphors for the light and dark, the rational and the irrational, the aspects of the self that we must integrate to find wholeness. The message is one of balance, acknowledging the depths and heights of the soul's journey and finding meaning in the convergence of contrasts.

Blessings,
Daniel Henry Rodgers

"Mr. Longfellow is the most popular poet in America; and deservedly so. But it is as a literary quack that he is entitled to our most pointed animadversion." – Poe

"We have been much grieved to learn that a poet of so high a reputation as Mr. Longfellow should have been guilty of the palpable plagiarism of which we have seen him accused." – Poe

"I do not plagiarize. I have a library that I consult and am grateful to. But I have never taken any other man's writings and passed them off as my own." – Longfellow

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The Raven and the Bard
-Daniel Henry Rodgers
The Raven's quill drips shades of blackest night, Its haunting words, a melody of fright. The Bard's natural lines, like "Evangeline's" fair hair, Shed history's warm light to chase away all care . From shadowed chambers where dark ravens shriek, To hearthside tales that bygone glories speak; The Raven and the Bard, in Inky War — Duel with words that stir the soul's deep core. POE: With raven's quill I scribe the ebon night, Dripping shades funereal in the tomb's dim light. The human soul, a twisted, Gothic stage Where madness reigns supreme and ravens rage. Your rhymes, though polished, lack the dark allure — The primal dread my "Raven's" lines immure. For in insanity, a truth far-flung is found, A terror vast when psyches are spellbound — As "Annabel Lee's" cadaverous grasp entwines, Revealing horrors in these Gothic lines. "Nevermore!" the raven's haunting, dread refrain — As my dark verses leave their spectral stain. LONGFELLOW: But Poe, your words, though haunting, lack the flow That "Psalm of Life's" bright verses warmly show: "Life is real! Life is earnest!" From my breast These words ring out, as wildflowers sun-caressed Breathe, sweet perfume. Let children's laughter peal Like music ringing through this woodland vale! Their joyous tones from memory's hearth shall start To fill my poet's soul with nature's art. And by the midnight ride that Revere made, I'll stir the patriot's fire that ne'er shall fade. POE: Your heroes, Longfellow, mere marble shades — Pale specters molded by my pen's perverse tirades. For 'tis the "Tell-Tale Heart's" insistent dread That ingrains horrors from the coffin's bed — The psyche's cella vinaria where madness lurks, Where primal fears in reason's shadows hark. These tortured realms, where sanity's façade, Lies shattered 'neath the mind's unraveling rod. Let rational thought in deathly slumber sink, Let senses rouse to that dread brink Where nightmares yawn — from this abyss, confound Shall lurid visions coil, my muse unbound! LONGFELLOW: But Poe, though darkness 'round your lines may sway, The village smithy's fire shall light my lay. Beneath the chestnut's spreading, hallowed bough, The smith's ringing anvil forges, even now, Anchors of iron, from our hills' strong bane, To steady heroes through the hurricane. So let my verse extol the humble trades — The ploughman's patience, hewn in furrowed shades; The woodsman's stalwart grace to tame the wild; Evangeline's devotion, love's immortal godchild. These simple souls with quiet glory burned, Whose epics bright from nature's tome I've learned. POE: The tell-tale heart's insistent, doomed tattoo, Where shades sepulchral weave a sable rue. In terror's wintry grasp, a ghastly tomb — A truth unbound as sibilated lies exhume Unquiet wraiths. The raven's eldritch knell, A baleful hymn from lips of blackest hell, Seeps through the gloom. Let stygian shadows slink, Let night's fell ravens croak from madness' brink! For darkness holds a thrall no eye can flee — An icy talon clutched around the soul's fey key. LONGFELLOW: Though wars and hurricanes may wildly blow, "Sail on, O Ship of State! Sail ever, mighty Union, go!" The human spirit, like an oak tree's bole, Withstands the tempest's blasts with steadfast soul. From patriots' courage to love's eternal vow, These epics blazon effulgent my "lofty rhyme" for now. Let freedom's torch, that "grand, heroic line" of old, Burn as a blazing star to make our future bold! Its radiant beams shall light our onward way — A guiding fire where noble hearts will not go astray. Through night's dark squalls, its brilliant rays will pour To show the path brave souls have walked before. UNDYING INK: SUNRISE from the CRYPT From shadowed crypts where raven hosts convene, And madness croons its ebon carolings obscene, To meadows bathed in morning's golden beams, Where wildflowers ope' to day's resplendent dreams; Poe and Longfellow, on ominous raven pinions Took flight — to realms where poesy's dominions Converged — the Gothic's midnight-shrouded bowers Entwined with verse where freedom's spirit flowers. From their quills' clash, an American refrain Was woven — words both darkly lush and sunlight-plain. A legacy emblazed in "Darkest Love's" fell script, Yet by hope's radiant lines forever lit. “This is the forest primeval,” Sayeth the Bard "What to the mind's frail grasp may madness seem But waking dreams within a dream?" Quoth the Raven. In undying ink, their legacy shall burn, A beacon guiding poets yet to sojourn. ----------------- "After Poe's death, Longfellow noted that all was forgiven and called him "richly endowed with genius." He added, famously: "The harshness of his criticisms, I have never attributed to anything but the irritation of a sensitive nature, chafed by some indefinite sense of wrong.""

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Date: 5/28/2024 3:36:00 PM
What a conversation You make them the same as ordinary people would discuss their favorite things, always protesting their personal favors is the best! Very human and great job.
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:33:00 AM
Dear Andrea, Thank you so much for your kind words! It means a lot to me that you enjoyed the conversation. Your encouragement fuels my passion for storytelling, and I'm grateful for your support. Here's to many more great discussions! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/28/2024 10:50:00 AM
Creative way to go with this poetry contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:32:00 AM
Dear Sara, Wonderful to see your kind comment this moring. Thank You!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/28/2024 10:16:00 AM
Wow what a poetic masterpiece remarkable and inspiring, Kelli
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:31:00 AM
Dearest Kelli, what uplifting words that just made my day. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/28/2024 10:00:00 AM
A masterpiece. WOW, what an engaging read. I’m comfortably content in my coven of shadows. Thank you for bringing me home. Had to +FAV this one!!
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:30:00 AM
Hey Edward, Your words mean the world to me. Thank you for your heartfelt praise and for making me feel understood and appreciated. Your support brings light to my shadows. Grateful for your kindness. Cheers to many more inspiring reads! Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/24/2024 4:12:00 PM
A sublime contrast between light and dark and between poetic styles, both weaving beautiful poetry, Great write Daniel
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Date: 5/24/2024 6:07:00 PM
Hello Joe, thank you so much for your kind comments . Have a great weekend my friend, Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 8:42:00 AM
Daniel, dear I admire how your poem adeptly weaves together the separate literary voices of Edgar Allan Poe and Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, highlighting their poetry techniques and thematic concerns. The raven's quill oozing "shades of blackest night" in the artwork pays tribute to Poe's gloomy and Gothic style, while the bard's lyrics evoke a feeling of warmth and historical richness that is evocative of Longfellow's more positive and nature-inspired poetry. Your analysis of these divergent approaches and the interplay between the two poets is perceptive and intellectually engaging. Thanks to your efforts, my comprehension of literary history has significantly deepened.
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Date: 5/23/2024 9:05:00 AM
Hello Sotto, Your insightful commentary on my poem truly warms my heart. I'm thrilled you appreciated the weaving of Poe's Gothic darkness and Longfellow's warmth and richness. Your understanding of the interplay between these two literary giants is impressive. I'm grateful that my poem deepened your comprehension of literary history—it's a testament to the power of art to connect us across time. Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful engagement. - Blessings, my Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/23/2024 5:23:00 AM
Egos egos. Both were awesome in their own right. It does go to show I think that we all have our own little niche in life, something we do better than most. In the end, eclecticism makes for a more colorful existence. Awesome write Daniel
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Date: 5/23/2024 9:03:00 AM
Hello Tom, Your observation that each person has a unique niche is spot on. We need to embrace our individual strengths and celebrate diversity to enrich our journey. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and found a connection in its message. Thank you for your thoughtful reflection—it's the beauty found in the human experience that must also include God. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/22/2024 3:16:00 PM
Great poetry oops
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Date: 5/22/2024 3:15:00 PM
This seems to be a gigantic undertaking! Way beyond my capacity as a writer right now but I hope to continue to learn, grow, and stretch my creative mind. This inspired me and others I'm sure. You've conjured a curiosity in me too read more popular poets of old. I feel inadequate to comment on this writing so I'm simply say it made me feel... and that is the hallmark of gray poetry! Xo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/26/2024 4:15:00 PM
Ty Daniel... for saying you like reading my writing... it means so much to me!
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Date: 5/23/2024 9:00:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Your humility and openness to learning are truly admirable. Remember, every journey begins with a single step, and your willingness to grow and explore new horizons is inspiring. Your heartfelt response means a lot, and I'm glad my writing sparked your curiosity. Embracing your feelings and allowing poetry to evoke emotions is what truly matters. Keep nurturing your creativity—it's a beautiful journey, and I love reading your poetry. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/21/2024 2:38:00 PM
A great writing about two great poets. This inspection of styles, as well as relationships of the poets, is an erudite discovery of their endless competition. I've gained knowledge of history through your story.
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Date: 5/23/2024 8:59:00 AM
Dear Hilda, Your appreciation for exploring two iconic poets and their dynamic relationship warms my heart. It's gratifying that my poem provided insight into history and their enduring rivalry. Thank you for your kind words and for engaging with the depth of their legacy. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/21/2024 8:50:00 AM
I knew of this rivalry, but feel plagiarism is an easy accusation to make, especially these days.. I like how your poem presents a rich, imaginative dialogue between the literary voices of Edgar Allan Poe and Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, each championing their distinct poetic styles and thematic preoccupations.. The raven's quill "drips shades of blackest night," a clear nod to Poe's dark, Gothic tone, while the bard's lines evoke warmth and history, hinting at Longfellow's more optimistic and nature-infused poetry...
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:14:00 AM
Dear Silent One, your insightful commentary on my poem is always deeply appreciated. It's heartening to hear how you perceive their distinct thematic territories and the eventual harmony in their literary contributions. Thank you for engaging with the poem's nuances and for your deep thoughtful ideas. I always love your insightful comments. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/21/2024 8:52:00 AM
The interplay between Poe and Longfellow in this poem highlights the dynamic spectrum of American poetry in the 19th century, from the deep, psychological explorations of Poe to the uplifting, nature-centric and patriotic verses of Longfellow. Each poet defends his own thematic territory, yet the concluding stanzas suggest a harmonious coexistence and mutual enrichment of their literary contributions. The poem is a testament to the diverse voices that together form a rich, multifaceted literary heritage.
Date: 5/21/2024 5:17:00 AM
Daniel, I didn't know of this rivalry, and you have done our community a great service by highlighting it. Your poem is marvelous. It immersed me in the controversy and has directed my thoughts to consider our nature. What am I really like internally and what do I wish to do? Your references to Longfellow's "Under the Spreading Chestnut Tree" are fantastic...stopped me in my tracks. From google's AI,"Longfellow admired the blacksmith, and explains to the readers how important it is to constantly be a good worker and have accomplishments as well as love in life." Anyway, so we get to ponder all this...I'm thinking that we have to be very careful when we make choices. Even small actions can have serious consequences and can bring us to the dark side if we are not careful. I also have and I think everyone has dark thoughts, but what we do with them...that is very character defining. In essence, you are giving everyone therapy...OMG it's wonderful!!
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:10:00 AM
Hello Duke, thank you so much for your thoughtful and insightful comments on my Poe/Longfellow feud. I'm thrilled to hear it sparked such deep reflections. Your appreciation for the references and how they made you ponder the nature of our choices is incredibly gratifying. It's wonderful how literature can make us question our inner selves and the impact of our actions. I believe that is partly what life is about. Your note truly means the world to me. Writing is a great therapeutic tool. Thank you! - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 8:59:00 PM
I was captivated by this masterpiece portrayal of two poetic giants, my friend. What incredibly interesting dialogue this is! This is a fave. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:06:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, I am honored that this is a FAV. They were absolutely two literary geniuses of their time that still rings true even today. Thanks, so much and many Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 6:18:00 PM
Both were amazing poets by their own right Daniel, outstanding work here, thanks for sharing. :)
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:05:00 AM
Dear Rose, Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. They were both top of the class poets for that Era and includes today. Thanks, Again, Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 1:24:00 PM
You have outdone yourself with this one! Poe and Plath are both wrapped in darkness but their poems are genious. Your poetic ivy weaves it way through the haunting of Poe and the human spirit of Longfellow. I was able to visit Poe’s home in Richmond, Virginia. Ahh… No beating heart against the walls, thankfully…lol
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:39:00 PM
Dear Kim, your comment warmed my heart! I'm so glad you felt the blend of Poe's haunting and Longfellow's spirit. Visiting Poe's home is incredible and I visited it about 3 years ago! Thank you for always seeing the depth in my work. Your support and insights mean everything to me. No beating hearts here either—lol! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 12:32:00 PM
Yet another barnstorming poem from you Daniel, the contrasting styles and minds of Poe and Longfellow, actually seem to consolidate here, and work to great effect, this is all down to your own personal creativity and high standard of poetry, of course the layout is superb too, cheers David
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:36:00 PM
Hello David, your feedback truly made my day. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the blend of Poe and Longfellow—it was a challenge, but worth it. Your praise for my creativity and layout means the world to me. Thank you for always being so supportive. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 12:15:00 PM
My studies, unfortunately, centred on English literature. Still I loved the way you write in dialogue. Two poets of great calibre. Can understand the tension between them.
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:34:00 PM
Hello Victor, thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot coming from someone who loves English literature. I'm glad the dialogue connected with you. Writing is my passion, and knowing it connects with others is incredibly fulfilling. There are a number of British poets I like also. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 10:27:00 AM
Daniel, I'm enthralled by your comparing and contrasting of the literary giants with their temperaments cleverly and skillfully displayed. A lively interchange plumbing the depths of mood and passion. I pictured a feisty one act play while reading your engaging dialogue. Poe a hyper critical literary critic, some thought him cruel, one critic called Poe the Gingle Tingle man because he thought Poe's poem “Bell”s ridiculous!
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Date: 5/20/2024 10:26:00 AM
Robert Louis Stevenson discovered during a nightmare that within him dwelled a repulsive being. This was such a rude awakening he wrote, Dr Jeckel And Mr. Hyde. I Enjoyed your tour de force, Robert (Soupmail)
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Date: 5/20/2024 10:56:00 AM
Thank you, Robert! I'm honored by your thoughtful and enthusiastic feedback. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the interplay between Poe and Longfellow. Your comparison to a feisty one-act play is exactly what I hoped to convey. Your insights and historical references add so much depth. I'm grateful for your support and kind words! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 7:44:00 AM
Wow, Daniel, this is an incredible feast of language, and a great idea to contrast them. So many great "Poe" couplets, e.g., "A truth unbound as sibilated lies exhume Unquiet wraiths. The raven's eldritch knell," Brilliant!
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Date: 5/20/2024 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, David! Your words truly made my day. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the poem and the contrast between the poets. Your appreciation for the couplets means a lot, and I was trying to mimic them. Thanks for the encouragement and support—it's incredibly motivating! - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 5:55:00 AM
this gives us an insight into two much loved poets and inspires us to try to write better you do well to honour such fine poets kudo and for me a fav hugs Shadow
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Date: 5/20/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shadow! Your kind words mean the world to me. I'm thrilled you enjoyed my poem and found it inspiring. Honoring Poe and Longfellow was a joy, and I'm glad it connected with you. Hugs back to you, my friend! Your support truly motivates me. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 4:51:00 AM
A stunning creation, Daniel. The dialogue you portray between two giants of poetry is a tribute to their styles. Kudos, my friend, for your poem too shines here with your deep insights.
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:19:00 AM
Hello Vijay, your generous praise for my Raven/Bard poem warms my heart. I'm grateful for your recognition of the tribute to Poe and Longfellow's styles and the depth of the dialogue portrayed. Your encouragement means the world to me. Thank you for shining a light on my work with your kind words. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 5/20/2024 12:19:00 AM
Dear daniel, as a fan of poe i couldnt help but admire your use of his classic diction to convey this tale! Its also very insightful as i did not know about longfellow, and i found it very entertaining how both did poetically criticize and justify their actions regarding plagiarism and more. How clever of you to write this! Made me smile how in the part of longfellow youv written poes poems did not flow lol! And youv ensured also both their styles of writing can be seen from the poem! Just impeccable and so creative! Poetically i must say this is just brilliant! One of the most interesting poe poems iv read , not just in. The way youv woven words and played around with them but also how youv left a long last informative impression! A fave this is for me definitely!
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 5/20/2024 5:17:00 AM
Dearest Empress, I always love your heartfelt and insightful feedback on my poems and fills me with utter gratitude. Your appreciation for the interplay of Poe and Longfellow's classic diction and their poetic critique means a lot to me. I tried to capture the essence of both poets and yet in my style. I'm thrilled that my poem could introduce you to Poe/Longfellow war while entertaining you with their banter. Empress your most kind words encourage and inspire me deeply, as always. Thank you for your support and for making my day brighter with your generous praise! - Blessings, my dear friend, Daniel
Date: 5/19/2024 5:15:00 PM
Your poem was informative and intense as it relayed conversations between Poe and Longfellow. I appreciate the introductory narrative as well as the ending remarks. Truly brilliant creation. I'm impressed with your poetic skills. Wishing you a splendid evening, blessings, Sara
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:13:00 AM
Dearest Sara, your thoughtful feedback on my Raven/Bard poem means the world to me. Your kind words and appreciation for the narrative structure and poetic elements truly touched my heart. Thank you, my friend, and wishing you endless inspiration and joy. Have a splendid week filled with blessings. - Daniel

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