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Misty Blues

Oh, trees of once so forest green now shrouded to me in pale hues as my hearts reflection of blues mirrors a lifeless figurine Pray hide from me sunbursts of glow for the sky is of mist alone and where I roam as cold as stone all thoughts run deep and overflow Shadowy shaped vapours haunt me with your gaze of cerulean blue and if to feel your touch I drew my hand that longed the touch of thee All worn paths I fear now to tread for there are haunting scents of you that so relentlessly pursue a heart that’s already long dead All alone as teardrops of blue and misty, hazy dreams of you float away once more out of view forsaking what my heart once knew

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Date: 5/31/2024 5:33:00 PM
Another masterpiece lovely lady.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/1/2024 6:14:00 AM
Dearest Wen, treasured beautiful comments from a treasured friend. Thank you so, so much for your illuminated presence here which always brings such joy. Also, for your continued valuable support. I managed to work out how to put a music vid on and was thinking of you when doing so :) I’m learning slowly! I hope you are all having a good weekend. Luv and blessings to you always. Big hugs xx
Date: 5/31/2024 1:57:00 PM
Dear Christina, I apologize for not previously acknowledging your beautifully crafted poem that delves into themes of loss, longing, and sadness. Your poignant exploration of heartbreak and solitude, as well as the lingering memories of a past relationship, is both moving and captivating. The emotive language you employ effectively conveys a sense of melancholy and yearning. The imagery you use, including words like "shrouded," "reflection of blues," "shadowy shaped vapors," and "teardrops of blue," evokes feelings of sorrow and longing. Your incorporation of color imagery, such as "pale hues" and "cerulean blue," enhances the emotional depth of the poem.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/1/2024 5:59:00 AM
Dear Sotto, always such a pleasure when you visit. Thank you so much for your in-depth and insightful response to the poem. Always so appreciated and a delight to read. Your encouraging and supportive visits are always so uplifting and inspiring to us all. Thank you so much for your careful and thoughtful analysis here once again. Heartfelt thanks and blessings to you.
Date: 5/31/2024 7:49:00 AM
Lost love is not easy, and healing takes time so well expressed in this work. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/31/2024 12:04:00 PM
Dear Sara, many grateful thanks to you for your thoughtful comments and encouragement. Very much appreciated. Thank you. Blessings to you :):)
Date: 5/30/2024 2:00:00 PM
What to say? Misty Blues, another masterpiece of my beloved Christina. Such a deligh to read!. Nature pain touched with your most profound feelings. I am not giving you my favourite line, because all the lines penned are genuine evoking the poor reality we have about our nature, which is the most important thing we will always have. BRAVO for this piece of art. My love Christinaxxx
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/31/2024 12:21:00 PM
My dearest, sweetest Maria, your presence here has lit the page and so brightened the day. Your generous heart never fails to lift the spirits just as your own so inspiring, uplifting poems do. Thank you so, so much my endearing friend for your continued, so valued support and belief in me. I so agree with you with our beautiful nature and also about music. Nature, music and poetry go beautifully together! I do like this instrumental piece and am glad that you liked it too.Thank you dear Maria. Have a wonderful weekend my wonderful friend with love and hugs xx
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 5/30/2024 2:02:00 PM
Another thing to add my friend. I love music, perhaps more than poetry, I must say that you chose the best to go with very well. Hugs
Date: 5/29/2024 8:15:00 PM
Hello Christina , such a beautifully sad but exquisitely written poem , every word spoke to me as if I were on the same journey, your poem is a pure delight to read , and is without doubt one to favour . You have a wonderful gift . Danny
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/30/2024 5:48:00 AM
Dear Daniel, lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much for your thrilling comments which are elevating. Your supportive feedback is a delight to read. An extra big thank you too for faving it of which I’m honoured and appreciative:):)
Date: 5/28/2024 8:36:00 PM
Your magic pe stirs so beauty once again. I am appreciative of your marvelos talent you share so stunningly withall. Thank you!! Pangie Romios
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/29/2024 3:10:00 AM
Dear Pangie, your wonderful, thoughtful comments warmed my heart with joy. So lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much dear friend. Always appreciated. Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 5/27/2024 9:39:00 AM
Christina, I don't know what superlative that I could add that would say more than to echo the incredible words of praise bestowed already by those far more gifted than me! I am deeply impressed by your lines! Happy Monday!!!
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/27/2024 10:09:00 PM
Dear Mike, your wonderful comments put a big smile :) on my face. Thank you so much for your thoughtful, generous comments which did make a happy Monday! I consider you to be a very gifted poet! Have a great day. Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 5/26/2024 8:35:00 AM
I loved reading your poem "Misty Blues". Very well written and very beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/26/2024 1:53:00 PM
Hello Emily - really nice to meet you. Thank you so much for visiting my page. I’m so glad that you loved reading the poem. Thank you so much! I look forward to visiting you :):)
Date: 5/25/2024 12:27:00 PM
A beautiful and haunting poem, Christina ... The Frank Sinatra song, 'It's A Blue World', came to my mind while reading this ...
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/26/2024 2:58:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Kelly for your lovely comments. I wasn’t familiar with the song so I listened to it and I can see what you mean with reference to the lyrics. Much appreciated. Blessings to you xx
Date: 5/21/2024 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful writing Christina so vivid and melancholic, great poem
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 11:58:00 PM
Dear Kate, thank you for reading the poem and for leaving supportive comments. I am most appreciative. Have a lovely day :)
Date: 5/21/2024 12:31:00 PM
Gosh Christina, you really tug at the heart strings with this one. You chose the music and image well to compliment the words. I think I just need a moment.. Nice job on all fronts. Blessings S :) x
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 3:15:00 PM
My dear friend Sam, always a joy when you visit. Thank you for sharing your treasured thoughts with me with this more emotional, sombre write. Also, for your continuing supportive presence which is much appreciated. Blessings and smiles :):)
Date: 5/21/2024 9:17:00 AM
Very soul-touching poetry, Christina! Beautifully expressed emotions...
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 3:05:00 PM
Dear Smita, thank you so much for your lovely visit and uplifting comments. Much gratitude and blessings to you xx
Date: 5/21/2024 1:58:00 AM
This poem is so evocative and the melancholy tone of the poem is so touching. The pain created by the loss of love and the deep yearning for your loved one make the poem stand apart. Your poems are characterized by their sincerity of tone and their spontaneous flow. Have a great week ahead, dear Christina !
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 6:43:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I loved reading your in-depth and perceptive comments. Thank you so very much. I truly appreciate it. Such kind, generous and inspiring words for my poems. I am thrilled to read them which are received so warmly. Thank you! Many blessings to you for the rest of the week with hugs xx
Date: 5/21/2024 12:41:00 AM
Such a gorgeously melancholic poem from your golden pen my dearest poet friend, Christina. I'm carried away with this masterpiece. Outstanding poem as always. So grateful for your very precious share today. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 6:39:00 AM
Dear sweet Len, hello my lovely. Heartfelt thanks to you for leaving such a wonderful, inspiring response as always. You always light up the pages wherever you go. Thank you so much. You have made me smile :) today. Big hugs and blessings to you sweet, dear friend xx
Date: 5/20/2024 7:14:00 PM
A lovely poem with a wonder Story to tell.Great job .
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 6:35:00 AM
Many thanks to you John for reading the poem and for your much appreciated supportive comments :):)
Date: 5/20/2024 9:57:00 AM
I would love an epitaph like that. The journey now over, but never forgotten. A lot of soul-searching in this one.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/21/2024 6:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Paul for your visit and thoughtful comments. Very much appreciated :):)
Date: 5/20/2024 4:34:00 AM
Dear Christina, What a hauntingly beautiful poem and deeply evocative. The imagery of pale hues and misty dreams perfectly captures a profound loss and longing. Each line is filled with raw emotion, depicting a heart adrift. It's poignant, powerful, and utterly mesmerizing. I love it! - Blessings, Daniel
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/20/2024 12:53:00 PM
Dear Daniel, so thrilled to read your response to the poem. Thank you so, so much. Always a delight to read your insightful thoughts and makes it all worthwhile. Thank you so much for your continued encouraging support to so many. I’m so delighted that you loved it :) Blessings of gratitude.
Date: 5/19/2024 8:10:00 PM
True to your promise, this is a sad, heart-wrenching poem. Yet I think it is best described as hauntingly beautiful. Bravo, Christina! ~ Lonely, but not forsaken, gw
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/20/2024 6:14:00 AM
Many thanks dear Gershon for visiting my page and for the delightful, inspiring comments. I love ‘ hauntingly beautiful’. Very much appreciated. Thank you! :)
Date: 5/19/2024 7:29:00 AM
Your masterly rhyme is great but beyond me. Your theme is popular and well-written. A poem I enjoyed very much despite some sadness.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/20/2024 3:32:00 AM
Dear Victor, so lovely to have you visit as always. Thank you so much my friend for your much valued feedback. I’m so pleased that you did enjoy it :) regardless of its sad theme.I hope your day will be full of warmth and sunshine today. Hugs to you.
Date: 5/18/2024 10:18:00 PM
So melancholy and beautiful, Christina. Brilliantly written, with a charming rhyme. Best wishes.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/19/2024 6:47:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, thank you greatly for reading the poem and for your supportive comments. I so appreciate it. Many blessings to you :):)
Date: 5/18/2024 12:51:00 PM
such a jewel of a poem with perfect rhyming pitch dear Christina, I thoroughly enjoyed it :)
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/18/2024 1:36:00 PM
Dear Rose, so lovely to have you visit. Thank you so much for reading the poem and leaving such uplifting comments. I am most grateful. I’m so glad that you enjoyed it. Blessings to you :) :)
Date: 5/18/2024 10:55:00 AM
A perfectly executed Enclosed Rhyme. Your poem epitomises the maxim: Poetry should be felt, rather than understood. FAVing it, Christina.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/18/2024 1:50:00 PM
Dear Suzette, many heartfelt thanks of gratitude to you for your visit and such joyous words of support and encouragement. Thank you so much. I am so thrilled and ecstatic to receive your comments. I’m equally elated to receive a fav from you. Made my day. Thank you! Also, for being so kind to answer my question regarding A poems. I haven’t entered many contests and will now know what is expected. Thank you for your generous, much appreciated visit. I’m still smiling :) Blessings to you x
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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/18/2024 11:05:00 AM
If I may answer your question to Andrea: you will see that Poetry Soup lists many tools and aids, example: Types of Poems. 'A poems' refers to the types of poems (in other words, the poetic forms) listed under 'A' at this site.
Date: 5/18/2024 7:47:00 AM
Your poem beautifully conveys a deep sense of loss and melancholy, using nature and evocative imagery to reflect the speaker's emotional state... It masterfully uses natural imagery and a melancholic tone to explore themes of loss, memory, and the haunting persistence of grief. Its emotional depth and lyrical quality create a powerful and moving reading experience.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
Dear SO, such a wonderful, accurate and perceptive analysis of the poem from you. Thank you so much for your visit and generous time with giving me encouraging feedback and as you do with so many. You are so very much appreciated. I love that you have noticed the natural imagery which is delightful. Thank you dear SO for your inspirational presence always. Blessings to you.
Date: 5/18/2024 5:44:00 AM
Oh gosh Christina, so terribly sad and bleak, but in a beautifully written way. This is classic poetry, an art form that is being left behind in favor of one liner quips that pass for neo-poetry and for which the Insta crowd with it's short little attention span craves. A fave for Tom Woody
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/18/2024 10:21:00 AM
Dear Tommy, I can hardly express my elation and gratitude to you for making my day my friend! Your valued comments are so thrilling, so uplifting and inspiring. Thank you so, so much. I’m swinging from the stars - I’ve got a fav from you :):) To me, that’s a golden trophy. I’ve done it! Thank you! I’m so delighted. I do agree with you - so many different art forms are being left behind and I think there’s still and always will be room for the classics as well as more contemporary works. We need to keep it alive. Thank you again :) :)
Date: 5/18/2024 5:22:00 AM
This poem is haunting sad it seems to be about someone no longer with us with which can relate to I lost my love in 2005 and still mourn him extra hugs Shadow
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Christina Bowring
Date: 5/18/2024 8:35:00 AM
Dear Shadow, it’s lovely to see you here. Thank you so much for reading the poem and taking time to leave insightful comments. I’m so sorry to learn of your huge, tragic loss back in 2005. Mourning of a loved one never goes away even as the years go on. The love you felt for them, the love you still feel for them and the huge void left in your life that can never be filled will always remain as they do in precious memory. Bless you Shadow. I’m sending back even bigger, extra hugs to you xx
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