Home » Poems » Carol Louise Moon » Liquid Illusion

Liquid Illusion

Intent on gleaning secrets, I observed my own reflection (instead of marine life) in this tide pool--its surface intoning, impulsing, insisting on its own rhythm, insinuating my face between its depth and my inquisitive mind. In this instant, I realized I must look beyond surfaces, incessant distractions. I plunged my bare face into the pool, invasive in my effort to discover its immense treasure, its unique interpretations--its soul.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/30/2024 10:29:00 AM

Dear Carol Louise, your beautiful imagery reflects the introspective depth of your wonderful pen. I adore the rich thought and expression of this poem. Superb and leaves me with verses to linger over. Warmest wishes my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/30/2024 2:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your generous words. I feel the sincerity in your appreciation for this poem (and others). I'm so glad you take the time to really absorb the reading of it. Warm wishes to you, too, my fine poetry friend. Carol Louise

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/18/2024 6:13:00 PM

I like, "In this instant, I realized I must look/beyond surfaces, incessant distractions."

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/20/2024 12:42:00 AM

Thank you, Mike. I'm glad you liked the poem.