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May 17, 2024

"A-form Only" Contest

Inspired by the Quote

Sponsor: Constance La France

"I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..." E.E. Cummings If you remember the ecstatic emotions we experienced, No unwavering obstacle could keep two of us apart! My life and yours intertwined in a graceful harmony You and I dreamed of a fascinating future together ! How we spent our days laughing and singing like free-spirited larks, Enjoying every moment of a blissful journey of our flight, A truly passionate longing quivered in our trembling soul, Rose blossoming in glorious splendour with no restraint, The ambrosial exquisite fragrance we carried in our hearts.

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Constance La France

Date: 5/30/2024 7:15:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/26/2024 9:35:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Acrostic write/story again. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/22/2024 9:40:00 AM

Malabika, such romance evokes a sense of the deep impact that love and romantic relationships can have on individuals. intense emotions and situations that deeply affect one’s life. You've explored love forever, the only thing that truly matters. "The ambrosial exquisite fragrance we carried in our hearts" Love it!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 5/20/2024 3:05:00 AM

It is beautifully written!! Hope this scores a win in the contest!! Hope you are well! I have been on a long tour of Europe and back a few days ago!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/20/2024 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, Krish. Delighted to see your inspiring comment, and to know you are back from your tour. It had been a long tour, you said - which countries in Europe did you visit? I had been to Europe - England, France, Italy - long time ago. My daughter is inviting me to accompany her to Florence this November. I love visiting Europe because of the glorious artwork by artists like De Vinci, Michael Angelo, and others. I have to visit your page to find your new poems. Warmest wishes ~

Silent One

Date: 5/18/2024 7:50:00 AM

A lovely acrostic and idea for this contest.. All the best..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2024 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Your visit and assurance with encouraging words, make me feel confident. Glad you liked the Acrostic. Best wishes ~

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/18/2024 6:30:00 AM

A lovely romantic poem, Mala. Much enjoyed this ode to heart.--Enjoying every moment of a blissful journey of our flight, A truly passionate longing quivered in our trembling soul---passion aptly flows through every line!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2024 5:58:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Vijay, for your kind visit, and lovely comment. So glad you - a talented poet from our site - enjoyed lines from this poem! Best wishes to you - continue writing the stunning poems you always do!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/18/2024 12:11:00 AM

Dear beautiful mala, what a brilliant acrostic this is! Exquisite diction and so heartfelt lines flowing so seamlessly throughout! Your words fit also the quote that youv chosen in this contest. I love how youv especially written “ My life and yours intertwined in a graceful harmony You and I dreamed of a fascinating future together !” every relationship starts with so many hopes and wishes but when it all becomes a distant memory it is painful.” Rose blossoming in full glory with no restraint” just love that ending! Brilliant! Best wishes for the contest! Im sure it will do well

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/18/2024 5:54:00 PM

Dear Empress, My heart starts dancing when I find comments from you and few of my other friends! We all know how much our poems get influenced by our memories! We pour our heart when we grab a pen (laptop at present) reminiscing the happiness and sadness we experienced many years ago. I am so glad you liked this little piece of writing! Love and Hugs ~

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/17/2024 5:12:00 PM

a lovely poem soulfully expressed. I especially liked 'ambrosial fragrance we carried in our hearts.' Best wishes with the contest, dear Mala. Have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/17/2024 6:18:00 PM

Dear Sara, You are such a great friend - your supportive comments inspire me to grab the pen and continue writing. Your talents and your kindness sparkle! Have a great weekend, Sara! Hugs~

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/17/2024 12:24:00 PM

Dearest Mala, this is a wonderful, expressive acrostic poem. A very passionate love that lasts through the years. I love especially, ‘ free - spirited larks’ and the last two lines. ‘ ambrosial fragrance we carry in our hearts’ such a lovely poetic line. So enjoyed this delightful, romantic poem my dear, sweet friend. Good luck in the contest. Wishing you a blessed weekend with hugs xx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/17/2024 6:12:00 PM

Dear Christina, I love the way you mention the lines or images that have touched you! You are one of those gifted poets I am learning every day from. I find this site a creative writing classroom - with so many talented individuals, each having their unique style. Hugs ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/17/2024 11:55:00 AM

Your "In My Heart" is a wonderful Acrostic write/great ending. I enjoyed reading this one. "Good Luck" Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/17/2024 6:08:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Paula, for your encouragement and support. It is a learning journey - we learn by joining these contests. Constance is a great sponsor.