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Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 May 18
Image: N/A
a point to ponder the worst students go to school only after hours ...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/19/2024 7:31:00 AM
Quite a tongue-in-the-cheek poem. Short and to the point. Great reflection.
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Date: 5/19/2024 4:33:00 PM
The joys of waiting for your friends doing what the church calls 'penitence' school terms as 'detention' for misbehaving in class--Oy ve! Thanks, Victor, Aloha

Book: Shattered Sighs