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Poetic Form: ABC/Concrete
Inspired: 2024 May 18
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Ottava Rima & ABC. Sadly, due its lack of artistic values and matching verbiage that would have met with an arguable challenge, hail an NFC poem--you see, as I found the bite in this baby to be all gums.
aurora beauteous cradle  diaphanous ephemeral finesse genteel harmonious invocations juxtaposition kerfuffle lollygag minimalized nexus obligates projections quintessence reservedly serendipitous traverses         universal  victorious winsome xenial yesteryears zen

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Date: 5/18/2024 4:09:00 PM
what a unique way to construct a concrete poem...had to read it a couple of days to get focused. Creative and challenging. have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 5/18/2024 5:26:00 PM
Sara, thanks but I opted out out as I saw its bite is all gums. Aloha, William

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