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For the "Cruella DeVil" lyric contest... meant to be read, or sung to the tune of Disney's 101 Dalmatian's song, Cruella DeVil. This was so fun!
Delicious DeVil, Delicious DeVil If he's never wooed you, there may be time still He’ll light the fire underneath your grill Delicious, delicious DeVil You may think this devil is too scary But he's only a lusty man of sin A passion that burns hotter than the desert You won't want out once you've been let in This good looking man, is good with his hands The last thing you'll think of is your wedding band So run the other way, resist the thrill Of this Delicious, delicious DeVil

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Date: 5/30/2024 6:08:00 AM
LOL… This good looking man, is good with his hands The last thing you'll think of is your wedding band…run, this one is dangerous.You’ll get burned! Congrats, Crystol!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/30/2024 7:25:00 AM
Oh for sure... perhaps a hunk of burning love? Haha! Thanks Kim
Date: 5/29/2024 12:15:00 PM
He needs the ice bucket for sure. Congratulations on your win Crystol. Emilia : )
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Date: 5/29/2024 8:58:00 AM
Hello Crystol. Congrats on your placement in the contest and thank you for taking part. How close will a moth dance near the flame? Your lyrics to me, highlights the thought of not relying on our own will to resist temptation. Well written :-D
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/29/2024 11:34:00 AM
Hey... Good rhyme there! "So resist this beast if you have the will...";) Or " he 'll seduce you against your weakened will..."
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/29/2024 11:20:00 AM
Thank you! Really fun contest!! Great job!

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