Belonging

do you think i belong here? so close to you, so near oh Penelope did you hear? she wants me right there.. but I am lost in deep mess in a pit, a fissure, an Abyss oh canopy of tall trees? i just want to be in bliss

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Tom Woody

Date: 5/15/2024 5:26:00 AM

Who's Penelope? Interesting poem Fatiha

Tom Woody
Date: 5/15/2024 5:34:00 AM

Very cool

Fatiha Aly
Date: 5/15/2024 5:33:00 AM

An imaginary friend of the female narrator of the poem, as she wanders under the canopy of tall trees. I wanted to add a picture with my poem too,haha. it could have been useful for understanding the imaginary context of the poem. But unfortunately its a premium feature. I'm Glad you found it 'interesting'. Regards Mr. Tom Woody .