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5/18/2024 for What Of...A Pearl? Poetry Contest sponsored by Craig Cornish

An oyster felt an uncomfortable itch Caused by a stinging sand grain. Ten fathoms deep, he slowly made - a pearl, So that he was free from pain. A tenacious Japanese ama, dove, This mermaid beauty 'neath the tide, Unbreakable, with just a knife and grit - A pearl - she deftly pried. A dream of a lovely fair-skinned lady, Perfect shoulders, flawless skin - A pearl - to hang between the snowy orbs, Below her graceful chin. A plan, a desperate man, a revolver, Its handle made from - a pearl - He'd purloin a huge oyster's record yield, But that's not how his scheme would unfurl. An oyster turns lemons to lemonade. Conversely, a man, instead, Takes that wise and appropriate adage And flips it on its head.

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Date: 5/20/2024 9:13:00 AM
Well done. I like the story within a classy rhyme. Good luck with the contest.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/20/2024 1:07:00 PM
Thanks Hilda!
Date: 5/19/2024 5:17:00 AM
nicely done, David. What a compelling poem and fantastic contest entry. Am faving this one. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 5/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thanks Sara, that boosts my confidence on it!

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