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The Symphony

Sometimes, always, & rather unsurprisingly, I start to wonder… why...my heart cannot explain, the corporeal notes, of music, in just a droplet, of rain.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/17/2024 2:22:00 PM

This is so beautiful Kate. Love the choice of your poetic, thoughtful words and the title too. I’m hearing musical notes emanating from the rain droplets as I read. A great sensory read of sound. Really enjoyed it. Have a great weekend :)

Kate Davies
Date: 5/19/2024 5:14:00 AM

Hi Christina, thank you for your kind words, it's much appreciated!

Silent One

Date: 5/16/2024 1:56:00 PM

Wonderful word weaving

Kate Davies
Date: 5/19/2024 5:13:00 AM

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/15/2024 5:46:00 PM

A symphony of nature, like this poem, is spectacular in it's dynamics. I enjoyed this idea of sound of rain, albeit, my ears are not finely tuned. I sense a touch of magic in the verse.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/19/2024 4:37:00 AM

Thank you Hilda, what wonderful words, thank you so much for the read and feedback:)

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/15/2024 3:45:00 PM

What a great poem Kate, so shallow yet profound all at once, very hard to strike such balance in poetry, beautiful verse, cheers David

Kate Davies
Date: 5/17/2024 11:15:00 PM

Thank you David :) I think you may have just described my personality there hahaha!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/15/2024 5:43:00 AM

Dear Kate, What a wonderful exploration of the ineffable beauty found in nature's simplest elements! I love the way you capture wonder and mystery, and how a single droplet of rain can evoke a symphony of emotions is truly remarkable. Your poetic voice invites introspection and appreciation for the profound depths that lie within the seemingly ordinary. This is a thought-provoking and exquisitely crafted piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Kate Davies
Date: 5/15/2024 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Daniel :) I love your poems and your encouragement really means a lot to me!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/14/2024 11:33:00 PM

Amazing, I at a loss for words.

Kate Davies
Date: 5/15/2024 5:09:00 AM

Thanks Arthur, this has made my day :)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 5/14/2024 11:26:00 PM

Very pretty image - I'm the same with raindrops

Kate Davies
Date: 5/15/2024 5:09:00 AM

Thanks Di11y :) glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the read!