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The Hills Awaken

Some hills come alive with a music sound. Where I live, there are hills all around. But listen to me. Let me tell you, bud, The only sound these hills make is "thud".

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Date: 5/15/2024 4:04:00 PM
oh, to have majestic mountains near you, unalive with no sound, saddens me. Nice rhyme, though.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/15/2024 6:36:00 PM
True, we have pretty good size mountains to the north - the San Gabriels. I think they're making music - I just couldn't hear this morning because I woke up on the wrong side of the bed - well not really - just in a strange mood. :-)

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